|Reviews for A Stagecoach Named Desire|
| MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Now this is the Charlie I love. You break it you buy it :)
| bluevolvic chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
LMAO brilliant ending line!
Loved this one shot,it was rather sweet.I think you captured the pairing nicely.
| Natasha37 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
LOL...nice ending line ;)
| Madison Elliott chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I loved it i think it could be a full story really good
| angstsmoker chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
BEST. LAST LINE. EVER
| sherryola chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
oh man, that was hilarious! But just one question: was bella truly innocent and overcome with desire, or was it a ploy to get edward as a husband? grin. Thanks for the fun read.
| ZooeyD chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I'm just gonna say that... CHARLIE YOU RULE!
| wonderingpixie chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Hehehe; that's a great ending!
| cvds chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
| blue-eyes-411 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Would love to read more! Loved it!
| annniej13 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Loved it, dear! So hot. I'm busting up over Sheriff Swan at the end! And Bella's goat comment. omg hilarious.
(patiently waiting for witchward 3)
| Aeralina chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Are you thinking about continuing this one? I really hope so
| Burntcore chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Oh this was a lovely one-shot. LOVED the ending. LOL
| AMomWhoWrites chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
So um yeah...I said I'd review, but I want to re-iterate that I expect to see a Chapter 2 because this idea is priceless and simply can not be wasted ;)
I'll even make you rice krispie treats! Although I may buy them from the bakery and make it look like I did it, but you'll get rice krispie treats none the less! I'll even add chocolate and have a bottle of wine! I'm sure I still have a vial of Moonshine around here somewhere!
I think the idea is brilliant and funny and something I haven't read before, but hope it's continued. I loved timed pieces and anything that ends with Charlie actually holding a gun to someone's head requires more. It's a fact in the rules of "How to Write Fan Fiction"...seriously, you can google it ;)
As far as Elemental, I do hope you get back to that one soon, but until then just write this one! It's win/win really!
Hope you're having a good day, see you on twitter :)
| twiradical chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
This was a great one shot, and I laughed loud at what Charlie said at the end :D
Do you think you'll ever continue this one shot into a short story or something?
Thanks for the one shot and I hope your Muse returns sooner than later,