Reviews for A Stagecoach Named Desire
MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Now this is the Charlie I love. You break it you buy it :)
bluevolvic chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
LMAO brilliant ending line!

Loved this one shot,it was rather sweet.I think you captured the pairing nicely.
Natasha37 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
LOL...nice ending line ;)
Madison Elliott chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I loved it i think it could be a full story really good
angstsmoker chapter 1 . 4/15/2010

Thank you.
sherryola chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
oh man, that was hilarious! But just one question: was bella truly innocent and overcome with desire, or was it a ploy to get edward as a husband? grin. Thanks for the fun read.
ZooeyD chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I'm just gonna say that... CHARLIE YOU RULE!
wonderingpixie chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Hehehe; that's a great ending!
cvds chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
blue-eyes-411 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Would love to read more! Loved it!
annniej13 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Loved it, dear! So hot. I'm busting up over Sheriff Swan at the end! And Bella's goat comment. omg hilarious.

Thank you!

(patiently waiting for witchward 3)


Aeralina chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Are you thinking about continuing this one? I really hope so
Burntcore chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Oh this was a lovely one-shot. LOVED the ending. LOL
AMomWhoWrites chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
So um yeah...I said I'd review, but I want to re-iterate that I expect to see a Chapter 2 because this idea is priceless and simply can not be wasted ;)

I'll even make you rice krispie treats! Although I may buy them from the bakery and make it look like I did it, but you'll get rice krispie treats none the less! I'll even add chocolate and have a bottle of wine! I'm sure I still have a vial of Moonshine around here somewhere!

I think the idea is brilliant and funny and something I haven't read before, but hope it's continued. I loved timed pieces and anything that ends with Charlie actually holding a gun to someone's head requires more. It's a fact in the rules of "How to Write Fan Fiction"...seriously, you can google it ;)

As far as Elemental, I do hope you get back to that one soon, but until then just write this one! It's win/win really!

Hope you're having a good day, see you on twitter :)

3 Kelly
twiradical chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
This was a great one shot, and I laughed loud at what Charlie said at the end :D

Do you think you'll ever continue this one shot into a short story or something?

Thanks for the one shot and I hope your Muse returns sooner than later,

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