|Reviews for second chances|
| Faery66 chapter 66 . 7/30/2020
Hope to read more soon.
| Amaterasu53 chapter 66 . 2/17/2020
Such a great story - so many of yours are. I just wish you were still updating! Please consider writing more!
| Guest chapter 66 . 2/21/2019
Please keep updating for all that is good in this world don’t let me down... I wanna know how the story ends
| Celty1208 chapter 8 . 1/12/2019
I find it funny that its the third time i read the sentence "Almost being the operative word," in one of your stories. I can't help but wonder; is it pure coincidence or do you have a sort of attachment to these words?
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/19/2018
This is hilarious and I am really enjoying it. But please be careful with spelling, grammar and punctuation.
| Tsukikageshi chapter 66 . 10/5/2018
Completely improbable but overall done well. What can I say? Fantasy is improbable things written well into a story. Not bad for a fanfiction.
| Tsukikageshi chapter 25 . 10/5/2018
I found this gem this evening but for this one thing I can't wait to the end to comment. It's a very interesting story... heat doesn't happen when pregnant. It means an animal is ready to conceive in the first place and does not happen while pregnant. That's not biologically possible.
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/1/2018
I quite like this story, but I gotta say. Naru Hana Hatake is a pretty stupid name. Why is it western-styled? The Naruto-verse is based on Japan. They don't do that shit there.
Nooow, if it was Naruhana Hatake/(Hatake Naruhana), iit would've been more acceptable.
| skyeza chapter 66 . 7/22/2018
Please, please im begging you, complete this brilliantly wicked story and upload it. I truly loved it. I thought it was very unique and intriguing and that it was awesomely done. Love Naru and Kashi, this kiddies are super adorable, i cant wait to see what happens next. This was a fantastic story, i found it so different and exciting. I really hope that the giant fluff ball gets the memories of his time with Naru. Please continue.
| Juliandog5 chapter 11 . 7/6/2018
I'm just saying...Minato was bottom
| AllenAndArth chapter 66 . 7/2/2018
poor Itachi-chan, Fugaku is jerk and Sakumo is too cool
| Ekatma chapter 1 . 6/28/2018
As someone who likes this story, I offer some advice: Please use proper punctuation in your title and summary, it can be very off putting.
Otherwise, this was a very good read. I enjoyed the characterisation and plot progression.
| Guest chapter 66 . 6/23/2018
You're back! I haven't read it yet but you're back! I'm so happy*-*
| Theopgamer1002 chapter 66 . 6/24/2018
And hope to good health
| ichika aono chapter 26 . 6/24/2018
"itachi chucked an iron cast skillet at" i love it!