Reviews for second chances
Guest chapter 4 . 6/13
Ummmmm... I'm fairly certain that Kurama and Madara didn't make a pact to destroy the village. It was more like Kurama was ripped out of Kushina's gut, and then was controlled by Madara's sharingan by force.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/12
You know how Naruto (male Naruto) looks like Minato? Then even if Naruto is femal then shouldn't she resemble Minato too? Also with the resemblance between Naru and Minato shouldn't the Hokage question it?
sammy.dodger.57 chapter 1 . 5/14
i can't say there's very much won't with the story. sure your grammar needs some work on but other wise it's a great story. the only actual problem i had with it was itachis age. he was only five during the kyuubi attack but you've changed a lot of the original time line so I've just been ignoring it for the most part
rukxichi.15 chapter 5 . 2/24
Good story
jaraiyatribute chapter 65 . 2/9
65 chapters...65 cha...65 FLIPPING CHAPTERS AND YOU DIDNT EVEN FINISH IT?!
Faery66 chapter 65 . 12/11/2016
Hope to read more soon.

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Bananabella chapter 19 . 12/3/2016
My thoughts when reading your fanfiction, this one :
Bleh
Ugh
Nice
Grammar
Just bullshit idfk
Is great fanfic 10/10/10
Bananabella chapter 9 . 12/3/2016
I have only one suggestion: get a beta. Your stories are great, the timeline is great the characters are well in character for the situations, and the only problem I have with it is the grammar and lack thereof. Everything else is fine, really.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/30/2016
I know that this was written a while ago but itachi was only around 5 when the kyuubi attack happend. So your time is really screwed up, it's impossible that he's already a high ranked ninja or together with Minato. And maybe you should take a beta or something for any other stories that you'll write because your grammer can use a little help.
Fable Linked chapter 65 . 8/5/2016
I am very disappointed... T-T
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I wanted more... and this fanfic hasn't been updated I'm 3 years plus.
Fable Linked chapter 63 . 8/5/2016
Girls had wolf ears.
Fable Linked chapter 62 . 8/5/2016
You said the symbol was carved into her breast not her stomach.
Fable Linked chapter 60 . 8/5/2016
I have too say that while I generally love misty of this fanfic, the fact that you continuously make the supposedly most powerful Shinnobi such a wimp to take down extremely irritating. If Naru was actually a BA like you've spouted this entire fucking Fanfiction, then why the flying fuck has she been consistently taken down by every EVERY single enemy she's faced? Especially when she knows that they're a treat to her and/or they want to torture, rape, and kill her (though not particularly in that order)?!
Seriously by my fucking God! If I'm faced with someone who has shown time and time again that they are not trust worthy and wish harm on me and my family then you can very without a doubt I wouldn't let them in my house (even if they forced their way in, Hell that'd make it 10x more likely for me to just slit their throats)! Further more Naru KNOWS that the Uchiha (or at the very VERY least Fugaku) is a traitor! Why the flying fuck hasn't she killed this fucker already?! Hell! I'd have stabbed him the second I caught him spying on me with my girl! Seriously! Dafuk is wrong with her! Fucking Dumbass idiotic moronicly simple minded little dip shit. -_-
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I'mma continue reading now.
Fable Linked chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
Today's List:
1) Kill Sasuke as brutally as quantum elasticity allows (must remember not to break the multiverse this time, don't want Cyril-chan to tell at me again)
2) buy eggs
3) buy Cyril-chan new dress (fire proof this time... Damn fire breath)
4) Torture Robert by sending him catchy songs that'll never leave his head.
Guest chapter 65 . 5/15/2016
OMG WHY?! WHY IS THERE NO MORE? Shiiit this cant be! Its totally getting exciting and there's no more?! I wanna see sakumo kick ass!

Plus I'd really hoped that her markings would've healed up since she can even fix up bones... Why not regrow lost skin? Or maybe they'd change the marks abit? Add on or smth? Like fixing a bad tattoo.

Fugaku needs to die. And all his accomplices as well. Though somehow making it not go down like the massacre... So somehow getting the rest of the clan more friendly with the others? And of course this can only happen I naru is awake. I don't think she'll be traumatized but royally pissed off and the whole village will know to fear her wrath by the time she's through with the idiots. And she might as well kill danzou while she's at it. Or unleash his deliciousness on him? He likes to hunt after all...

Please continue? Its hard to find a good story now. Well that's mostly because I like to stick to completed stories but this sounded really nice and I learnt that its super cute with the chibi wolfs and kakashi and how he acts around naru. It just really cool and very very interesting. I read all 65 chapters in one sitting. Just couldn't help it *shrugs*
I'm giving up sleep here! *gasp!*

I think its kinda hopeless now that its been a couple years since the last update but I still hope that this fic will be seen to completion. Even if it maybe a rushed job and you don't go into much details and generalize what she changed and did better and they lived happily ever after kinda of ending would still be better than none. Well I hope you have enough time to even think abt it :)
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