|Reviews for Crossroads|
| that guy too chapter 20 . 11/24/2012
That was another great chapter, but thats not surprising. Great work.
| The Cretin chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
Avandra, I'm sorry I'm late. Thanksgiving Holiday was so hectic this year. I aplologize.
I think you made a good decision considering Star and Rob. Their romance was deep...in both the comics and in canon in general. It was well handled as well. Rob would need reassurance and Star is, out of all the Titans, the one that has always handled that aspect the best. So again, I don't think it was inappropriate.
Good job with Raven and Arella. Its realistic and makes sense that Raven wouldn't want her mother interfering in her romantic life with BB.
I have to say: Nice touch with Garth and Terra. Didn't see it coming. Totally surprised me. Then again, I like surprises ;) Interested to see how that turns out.
I've been thinking on that OC. Been refining him somewhat. If you want, we could go over it in a PM.
Best wishes . Keep rockin
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/16/2012
I have an OOC for you this day.
Name:Stella P. Coskerry III
Coded Name: Mistressa
Occupation: Merchant/Assassin/Mercenaries Corp Leader
Stella is a neko (half demon) with white bunny ears are her head. Her demon blood gives her better hearing, the ability to run and jump better, and yes a weakness for carrots. Stella never kills unless payed to do so, that why her weapons of choice are duel .357 magnums fulled with a modified rubber rounds and a unsharp golden Khopesh (Egyptian sword check wiki). She is a genius tactical commander, and stealth operative.
| The Cretin chapter 19 . 6/6/2012
Awesome chap. I can't help but notice after reading your earlier works that now you write more fluidly. Your stories flow better now so that's proof you've improved. Don't worry about comparing yourself to Stephanie Meyer. All writers (pro or fanfic) are a series of tradeoffs. No two are the same. Some will always be better at something than others. Likewise, some will always be worse at somethings than others. With all due respect to Mrs. Meyer, I wasn't impressed to with Twilight. Now do I think she wrote a great book? Not really. Do I think her capable of writing? Well...yes. She's just got to hit that formula ya know. I will say this: While I'm not a fan of hers, I do not think she deserves the personal attacks she's received. That's just bad taste, especially over a book. That said, on to that OC. Seer would be about the same age as the Titans...physically. His true age would be in the thirties or forties. That's if you do the math. Remember, his grandfather fought in WWII and saved his grandmother from a death camp. Hitler did have many Gypsies put to death tragically. If he aged normally, he would be a little too old to slug it out with teens. So his aging is slowed but he's not immortal. Sorry I forgot to put that up there. I envisioned him as an American Southerner because he uses guns and guns are very prevalent here. Plus, I really can't think of alot of "Southern" DC characters. Marvel has several. I thought it'd be nice to put one up there. There have been others such as him before along his Romani bloodline but as I said: Only the females can contain the Vision. He was born male. In the past the males usually didn't last long once the madness took over. He's fought it for so long. As for being good or evil: I never really decided. Since he knows everything (not in a smug sense but literally SEES and KNOWS all that's going on) he'd be in a tough spot to choose sides. For example, could he really fight against Slade when he's "seen" such Slade prevent a rape? (Slade may be a villain but he does have honor.) Likewise, could he fight alongside Batman when he's seen Batman keep secrets and sideline his teammates without them knowing? I guess I always envisioned him as an anti-villain/anti-hero type. He would be the only one capable of making that call. He's a character and setup I've wondered about since my preteens. If I do make that account I'll give you his whole biography but like I said: Do with him as you please. He's been with me for a long time. Funny, I'm trying to stay anonymous but YOU are gonna drag me into the light to help you...LOL. Staying anonymous lets me help from the shadows, kinda like Darkwing Duck or somebody. I REFUSE TO COMPARE MYSELF TO BATMAN AND NIGHTWING!...I hate them8D. LOL, Avy I do so enjoy this. Anything you want my help with just ask. You and your loved ones take care and stay safe. Always a pleasure. Keep rockin
| Rosemarie Benson chapter 19 . 6/6/2012
Good chapter! Keep writing and update soon!
| that guy too chapter 17 . 6/4/2012
Great chapter! I read the AN at the end of the chapter if you need my to resend my occ let me know!
| HardtoConcentrate98 chapter 18 . 5/29/2012
Was that an intentional Princess Bride reference? BECAUSE I LOVE IT :) Keep the good work up, can't wait to see what happens to Raven! (I'm a hopeless BBxRae shipper lol)
| onominous chapter 18 . 5/29/2012
Yay, i've finally caught up! and now i have to wait for you to update. *sweat drop* OH NO! whats gonna happen to our favorite empath? who knows how twisted omegas mind is! onominousII
| onominous chapter 17 . 5/29/2012
Lol, the cat...er mud fight made me laugh. poor terra, but i think i kniw the perfect partner for you. i get the hunch that the hooded figure is Arelle but i cant be sure. and finally, noooo. someones attcking. cal 911!
| onominous chapter 16 . 5/29/2012
Awwwww...so romanticly adorable! and you were so not ooc, raven probably would be lost for words. and...OH NO! terra, the suspense! off to read the next chapter! onominous
| onominous chapter 15 . 5/29/2012
woah, not Beast boy! what has he done. has rage consumed him so much that he would do something that he denied to do since...forever!
even though they malipulated him, i still feel they were doing their jobs. i feel sad now. look on the bright side...there's another chapter! onominous
| onominous chapter 14 . 5/28/2012
Woah, nice! the suspense...it's too much! what is psi planning? and does she have something against blonds? (i think she's just jealous) why does omega want to kill raven? all thesed questions will soon be answered i hope. until next time, keep rockin', and enjoy fanfiction! onominous-
| onominous chapter 12 . 5/28/2012
whoa, intense! not the titans. i cant hope but wonder if this was part of the plan, though! onominous
| IWLYD chapter 18 . 5/28/2012
Es muy buen fic amazin one
| onominous chapter 11 . 5/28/2012
At least gar has some sence back, but seriously, you leave us wonde3ring what dreams he had? not cool dude! great chapter! happy memorial day! onominous