Reviews for Messenger
Jessica314 chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
This was such a neat idea, using the emails! I never realized how clear they show the progression of Bella's state of mind. And of course Edward left at the worst possible moment-how like him!

Lovely writing, and lovely angst. Well done!
Percabeth Trumps Jasper chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
wow...deep ;) lol liked it
Justine Lark chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Great story! Very evocative. I love stories that explore Alice and Edward's sibling relationship and the conflict and kinship that they feel. I wouldn't classify it as "Romance" though, because that gives the wrong impression! Maybe Hurt/Comfort or Family.
Stephanie C chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
That was really good. You got the mood of the characters just right.

And very poetic. I especially like this line: "the ache is almost enough to cause her to remember the echo of her own heart beating."
Julie chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I love your story! It really is amazing! Those quotes were from the New Moon movie, weren't they? They fit really well into your story!
Nightmarcher89 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Damn, that was well written. An interesting look into how Edward and Alice dealt with it all while they were gone.

If this had been in "New Moon", that book would have been that much darker. :\