|Reviews for Corruption|
| RenaKane chapter 2 . 1/28
Was someone watching James Bond movie's before writing this? )
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2013
I'm liking this fiction, just a one thing. About the sex scene, if you don't have experience with anal sex it would be extremely painful to just ram it in, pardon me saying so, especially if Scorpius had never had sex that way before. It would hurt, a lot. To the point he would definitely not enjoy it. Preparation is everything when it comes to that sort of sex, just saying.
| kim chapter 44 . 12/15/2013
| Pepperfudge chapter 30 . 12/7/2013
I love your descriptions of Al as overflowing with love and as warm, carefree and slightly messy. He's a mix of Harry and what I always imagined James senior to be.
| Pepperfudge chapter 27 . 12/6/2013
I like your depction of Draco. I want to write my own story about next gen and it's very helpful to read other people's depcictions of the characters to form my own. I like how on this site we're sort of forming our own universe with common themes and common depictions of characters. Although people's ideas about the characters vary, I think they will increase in complexity as we see different perspectives.
| Pepperfudge chapter 26 . 12/6/2013
I'm excited to see what Scorpius's next move is!
| Pepperfudge chapter 25 . 12/6/2013
Intense! I was pretty surprised that Malfoy reacted so strongly to Albus trying to break up with him, and I was suprised as well that Al has fallen in love. I love Louis's character!
| Pepperfudge chapter 24 . 12/6/2013
I'm enjoying your story! I like that you have a darker Scorpius and that some of the issues from the original series are still present in your universe.
One thing I've noticed that's really interesting about your writing is that instead of using pronouns you always use "the man" to describe the characters. Is this intentional or symbolic? I'm very curious about this stylistic choice.
| u don't know me chapter 44 . 12/3/2013
i. love. you. so much! please make more and never stop! then become an author so i can show my friends your writing and not look at me like i'm crazy!
| kim chapter 34 . 12/2/2013
| VexenIV chapter 44 . 11/30/2013
| bkaddictjk chapter 44 . 11/11/2013
They look just like us when we were that age.
| kim chapter 5 . 11/10/2013
Hahaha. Nice one albus.
| 16-ZippY-16 chapter 4 . 9/18/2013
"at least woman take care of their appearances and don't tell annoying fart jokes all the time"
Me: ... Uhh. According to this then I'm not very feminine... XD
| Scrawled In Biro chapter 44 . 9/1/2013
I have sat here for about two days just reading this fic and I'm speechless. Beautiful, tender, haunting, hilariously funny and hot as HELL, I loved all these versions of the characters and the story line was compelling, believable, gripping, thrilling and still managed to move me. Scorpius was AMAZING in this. And the idea of Louis having a properly organised fanclub preventing the rise of the dark arts made me grin. I just loved everything. Especially the mind blowing sex. Because WOW. And I just adored Rory and Louis in this. Oh Bloody Hell. I'm literally lost for words. I laughed, I cried, I had to keep wiping my laptop when Al and Scor kept steaming up the screen ;) man. You keep surprising me. Please keep writing. This is what you're born to do