Reviews for A Madness Most Discreet
Owyheewinds chapter 8 . 7/14
Your Scotty was totally on point!
mary shooter chapter 11 . 5/26
i don't know how too put this but if spock and kirk as in love before spock was a woman iam trying to think of a name for them but can't just yet
mary shooter chapter 10 . 5/26
i don't mind if they are long or short
mary shooter chapter 7 . 5/26
now kirk has found spock will they fall in love a second time and will spock still be a woman or turn back to himself
mary shooter chapter 3 . 5/26
i'a m readinge this and looking at an tos one on t.v this moring
mary shhooter chapter 2 . 5/26
if spock as turrned to a woman will kirk what him to stay that wat
mary shooter chapter 1 . 5/26
if you turn spock into a woman let him or her have long black hair and if you can make look somethink marlin monroe
Janet chapter 11 . 5/29/2015
That was fun; thanks for writing it!

But you know, Kirk HAS seen Spock sleep. In "Return of the Archons," the landing party spends the night of the Festival at Reger's house, and we see Kirk prowling around the room in the early morning, while the rest of the landing party is asleep. There's even a shot of Spock on one of the upper bunks.
Janet chapter 2 . 5/29/2015
What about the shuttlecraft? If the transporter doesn't work, they can pick the landing party up with the shuttle. It seems unlikely that Kirk would just sit around and wait, with a shuttle bay full of craft, and Sulu always itching to practice. :-)

Of course, I understand that you need to have the landing party stranded on the planet, so the mysterious gas can work its will on Spock. :-) But that will be more believable if you mention a reason why they can't send the shuttles down.
Linvalay chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
oh i loved this so much! You've no idea how much i enjoyed this, and even though your chapters are short that works. I prefer short chapters actually :D
WeirdLittleStories chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
Um, what about the fact that Spock's hormones are out of whack and he could die? Wasn't that an important plot point in the previous chapter?
Samdaawesome chapter 6 . 5/22/2012
R U INSAINE? I'm serious. Spock and Kirk? Ok just cause they are best friends does not make them gay. Would have sex with ur best friend? I like strange things that happen to the crew, but I'm sick and tired of the slash! It's just grose. OK? I love the beginning but chapter 5 went to far. Try again but please leave out the slash
Samdaawesome chapter 6 . 5/22/2012
R U INSAINE? I'm serious. Spock and Kirk? Ok just cause they are best friends does not make them gay. Would have sex with ur best friend? I like strange things that happen to the crew, but I'm sick and tired of the slash! It's just grose. OK? I love the beginning but chapter 5 went to far. Try again but please leave out the slash
Livia Ellis chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
Really enjoyed this. Great all around.
Yingxs chapter 11 . 4/30/2011
Thank you,that was another Enterprise Episode, but with a twist.I hope you keep writing.
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