Reviews for A Madness Most Discreet
Janet chapter 11 . 5/29
That was fun; thanks for writing it!

But you know, Kirk HAS seen Spock sleep. In "Return of the Archons," the landing party spends the night of the Festival at Reger's house, and we see Kirk prowling around the room in the early morning, while the rest of the landing party is asleep. There's even a shot of Spock on one of the upper bunks.
Janet chapter 2 . 5/29
What about the shuttlecraft? If the transporter doesn't work, they can pick the landing party up with the shuttle. It seems unlikely that Kirk would just sit around and wait, with a shuttle bay full of craft, and Sulu always itching to practice. :-)

Of course, I understand that you need to have the landing party stranded on the planet, so the mysterious gas can work its will on Spock. :-) But that will be more believable if you mention a reason why they can't send the shuttles down.
Linvalay chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
oh i loved this so much! You've no idea how much i enjoyed this, and even though your chapters are short that works. I prefer short chapters actually :D
WeirdLittleStories chapter 7 . 10/5/2013
Um, what about the fact that Spock's hormones are out of whack and he could die? Wasn't that an important plot point in the previous chapter?
Samdaawesome chapter 6 . 5/22/2012
R U INSAINE? I'm serious. Spock and Kirk? Ok just cause they are best friends does not make them gay. Would have sex with ur best friend? I like strange things that happen to the crew, but I'm sick and tired of the slash! It's just grose. OK? I love the beginning but chapter 5 went to far. Try again but please leave out the slash
Samdaawesome chapter 6 . 5/22/2012
R U INSAINE? I'm serious. Spock and Kirk? Ok just cause they are best friends does not make them gay. Would have sex with ur best friend? I like strange things that happen to the crew, but I'm sick and tired of the slash! It's just grose. OK? I love the beginning but chapter 5 went to far. Try again but please leave out the slash
Livia Ellis chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
Really enjoyed this. Great all around.
Yingxs chapter 11 . 4/30/2011
Thank you,that was another Enterprise Episode, but with a twist.I hope you keep writing.
TotallyCaptivated chapter 10 . 4/18/2011
AGH! I LOVE THIS! IT'S ADORABLE! I don't fully trust the alien dudes though. On the ship he seemed kinda creepily obsessed with Spock and mentioned mating. Although that was when Spock was a chick, so that creepy factor may be resolved now. Please Update as soon as you can.
TotallyCaptivated chapter 9 . 4/18/2011
"So the usual."

I. Love. That. Line. So. Hard!

Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
TotallyCaptivated chapter 8 . 4/18/2011
GAH! LOVELY!
TotallyCaptivated chapter 7 . 4/14/2011
that last paragraph was pure gold.
TotallyCaptivated chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Ooo~! I LOVE this! ( I may have already said that but oh well ). It's getting interesting! :D:DDDD Spock as a girl adorable.
TotallyCaptivated chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
i like this so far,interesting plot.
wildchartermage chapter 10 . 2/28/2011
Awww, very short and I would like to see bit more development in the story, but it's your story, I guess. xD

Please update soon anyway! :)
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