Reviews for Black Swan Event
Annara Ren chapter 3 . 5/17/2010
Very nice beginning :)

I am very interesting to reading more of this story.

Best wishes,

BiowareFan chapter 1 . 5/13/2010

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed what you have written so far...I like the way you get into Miranda's head and explore her thoughts.

Please continue this masterpiece!
Havoc-legionnaire chapter 2 . 4/16/2010
Good writing so far. So far the first fic I've seen on Shepard from Miranda's point of view. No real errors but you do go a little overboard with stating Miranda's mindset and thoughts. There is not yet enough plot elements available for me to give a better critique. Curious to see whether this story will rely more on action or dialogue. I do hope, however, that this is not just a novelization of ME2; novelizations on FF is never good. Let's see what you can do with it.
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