Reviews for Out
ieatlorriesforbreakfast chapter 5 . 4/28/2010
I love this fan-fiction XD thank you so much for writing it and for successfully distracting me from my own exam issues XDD
Yoshi333 chapter 5 . 4/28/2010
o... i really like where this is going even if it isn't 8059 . i really like the plot. i try not to read one-sided love fics because they make me sad most of the time XD but please continue this! x x
Yusuke kun chapter 5 . 4/27/2010
OMG! can hayato do reborns training? And can he pass the test?
Geez! Poor takeshi.. .little dera is very mad at him.. .how sad...
Yoshi333 chapter 4 . 4/26/2010
Yamamoto is -_- stupid. that would be awful poor Gokudera . hope you update soonish x x
Yusuke kun chapter 4 . 4/23/2010

Poor cute takeshi... Second time being dera's punching bag.

And now, dera's going out of the closet!


i'll be waiting for yar much longer update on monday!

melissa42 chapter 4 . 4/23/2010
Poor Gokudera! Yamamoto needs to find some way to make it up to him. _
lynixe chapter 4 . 4/22/2010
keep up the good work

I like how it is going

man, Yamamoto can be too talkative at times

feel so sorry for Gokudera
Yoshi333 chapter 3 . 4/20/2010
. i still love this and i've got exams coming up too [ in 4 weeks *cries* anyway i'm glad you'll be putting a little 8059 in it i do love that pairing. I can't wait to see what happens next. x x
Yusuke kun chapter 3 . 4/19/2010
Yayks! So short... Please update sooner, i want to know what will dera choose..


and what will reborn do if dera told him his secret! XD
melissa42 chapter 3 . 4/19/2010
I like where the plot is going, can't wait for the next part!

Lol, I was going to mention something about the tense changes, but it seems you noticed that already :P And I didn't notice it in this chapter, but in the other two chapters you wrote 'noone' (it should be 'no one'). Other than that, great job!
Yusuke kun chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
I can't w8 to know what will happened next! : )
Yusuke kun chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Yay! Poor takeshi. :)
Yoshi333 chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
Aw Yamamoto is being supportive of course he would be though . he doesn't seem the judgemental type. I really like this fic no OOC yet :p hope you carry on with it can't wait till the next update x x
melissa42 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
It seems like a good starting point. I can't wait to read the next parts! Are you going to keep it 5927, make it 8059, or have no pairing? Although, if you want to keep it a secret, that's fine too _
RainbowMushrooms chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
good start! Poor Yama-chan...

Of course, Gokudera is just in denial...

Will this become an 8059? Hopefully? Please?

Update soon!
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