|Reviews for Emperor|
| Frisc0 chapter 38 . 3/9
Fantastic story! I am a fan of your story-telling genius.
It was said before NS went to war with France that this was the time for Neville to shine, especially since Harry (The King) had to stay back at Liverpool. Considering that he is the most prominent mage other than Harry, I was expecting greater coverage on his feats/heroics that would establish his reputation firmly (just like Harry did during the Anglo-Spanish war with his feats of magic). Instead, there has barely been some passing references to good old Nevvie since the war started. Any reason why his role/magical prowess has been marginalized? Why not involve him in some of the more critical missions to showcase his greater than average magical abilities that set him apart from other military mages?
And William and his brilliant mind hasn't seen much action either against the rising threats. I understand your concern on streamlining the plot and cutting down on the POVs to stop jumping around randomly as you have too many important characters. But do mention their roles/participation/contributions to any major plan/operation. Leaving a main character out of the 'big' plays is inconceivable.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep em coming.
| FalconLux chapter 5 . 3/8
Wow. I love how Harry's ruthless brilliance is blossoming. You've done an excellent job of shaping him, one logical step at a time, from an ambitious boy into the powerful, charismatic, intimidating Emperor. Good stuff.
| FalconLux chapter 4 . 3/8
Still great, excellent, awesome. I was so eager to get to the next chapter, I had to flip back when I realized that I'd forgotten to leave a review. Again. Woops. Anyway, this fic deserves lots and lots of reviews, so I'll try to help with that! ;-)
| FalconLux chapter 2 . 3/7
Compelling. I'll admit, I was a little intimidated to start reading this in the beginning. It's a little more AU than I usually read, and there are a lot of OCs. And it's really quite long, which too often indicates extremely slow pacing and the frequent urge to just skim ahead to the good part. Of course, I am very glad that I decided to give this a try. Obviously, I've not yet found the pacing too slow. ;-) The OCs are fun. I absolutely LOVE Elicia. Apart from being a bit pacifistic, she's perfect for him. And I'm adoring their non-relationship. Harry's path toward achieving his incredible goals is extremely interesting.
Anyway. Yes. Love it. Going to read more now.
| PoptartProdigy chapter 10 . 3/6
How did Sirius shake a quadriplegic's hand?
This was a good chapter. I actually like interludes; they have more of a "day-in-the-life" feel to them than titanic action sequences. Men and women are forged in adversity, but they get put to use in peacetime, and that's when the really interesting stuff happens.
| PoptartProdigy chapter 9 . 3/6
Harry holds back from going forth to wreak havoc on Birmingham because he doesn't want to provoke public resentment by unleashing magic on Britons.
Then Neville shows up, and Harry exults in the fact that he can now unleash magic on Britons.
Which is it? Can he or can't he? Or is the problem with Harry *himself* using magic? As in, is he afraid of provoking resentment of himself personally? If that's the case, I don't think other people doing the magic would help that situation any, since they're still very much under his command, and their decisions and actions are his responsibility.
Aside from that, this is a great chapter. I particularly loved the scene at the end with the King. Harry is sympathetic, but it's still definitely fun to watch a situation in which he's completely outmatched - if only because the other guy is so damn awesome for doing so.
| Jakyland chapter 38 . 3/5
Cliffhanger much! Can't wait for next chapter
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 3/4
Well, isn't Harry a fucking dumbass? Instead of just killing the damn Auror he has to do the stupid thing and talk to her giving her the chance to escape along with info on him and also that the Goblins are helping... Once again, fucking idiot, an here i thought he was suppose to be smart
| CodePython chapter 38 . 3/2
I have no complaints for this story so far except for the name of the Northern Sun. It's just, er, uh, meh.
| Rowan Mikaio chapter 38 . 2/27
This was especially interesting for me because I watched AoT in the last two weeks, so it was a little surprising to see some of this. I even had the stupid theme songs stuck in my head at one point while reading.
It's good to see another update and I can't wait for the next one!
| BlackRevenant chapter 2 . 2/26
Holy. Fucking. Shit.
This... is kinda amazing. So much ground work. I can easily see the road you want to take this story on.
I can't even put into words exactly what I'm feeling except I am quite aware of the gravity of the World your building.
And its that reason why I cant read this. Not yet.
Not in the right mindset to fully appreciate this.
So it goes into my favorites until such time.
| BlackRevenant chapter 1 . 2/26
And so it begins.
I have no expectations. I've simply seen this on a lot of my favorite authors favorites. If they like it, maybe I will too.
Lesse where the ride takes me.
| flame55 chapter 38 . 2/26
This is great
| Eagle chapter 38 . 2/26
Okay, yeah, I know you won't respond to my reviews until I get around to making an account, but that doesn't matter since this one is mostly fanboying.
Holy. Crap. Here I was thinking you'd totally forgotten about Italy (though I am still curious about the Vatican) and here you go wrapping it into the ETO/Northern Sun in a delightful manner that seems to fit perfectly. This, in addition to Ginny's doubts about Albion, which I was REALLY not expecting and Hughes finding out the Mentor is Voldemort (that was hilarious by the way) and the updated prologue... Is there any wonder I love this fic? It's almost Code Geass-esque in some of its strategies and tactics, and it's done nothing but get better as it goes along. I'm looking forward to seeing how the ETO solves the problem of Austria and takes out Germany... and then the war with Russia after that. I CAN'T WAIT for the next update.
| Eagle chapter 1 . 2/26
Me again. I LOVE this new prologue. The old one was awesome, yes, but this just raises so many questions and clears up the Edinburgh problem the old one had. Also, I like the rift between Katerina and Harry. Makes me wonder what kind of Empress she'll end up being.