the fact that muggles could do anything against wizards is such a joke- wizards are a bunch of invisible, teleporting, mindcontroling bunch that can hide behind notice me nots and muggle repelling wards and hide there indefinitily with a 100% imposibility of beeing found
a war starts: 10 min later every nations leadership is imperiused- only reason grindelwald couldnt do that is cause there were wizards defending the muggles from this. the muggles themselfs were completly helpless

Fuck, I this fic was actually insane. I Love It. Shame that it seems to be abandoned though.

Within intelligence jargon black refers to a level of secrecy above top secret. It doesn't exist. Congress can't see it. The president doesn't know. No one outside the op gets to know anything unless it becomes a necessity. It is not a catch all term, for shady paramilitary intelligence operations. Count the amount of people in your story who know about Agent Santos. That's about how many to many.

Disillusionment charms can be cast on regular soldiers. just foot men not the tanks. Also anyone on a broomstick, and anyone who can be on a broom stick should be, should be disillusioned as well as their broomstick. Invisibility cloaks would be provided to scouts who are going to be out for longer than the charm lasts. Wizards can turn people INVISABLE. The air force as a slogan: "If we can see it we can kill it" If you can't see it, there's not much you can do about it. Also you keep talking about interigations, Veritaserum.

Honestly i was told this was a good kingdom building fic but for me its not its way too fast paced i dont feel anykibd of connection to mc cus the childhood was just skipped the childhood could have been easily over 400k words at a relativly good speed so i am prob gonna just drop i mean it not bad but far from something i would enjoy

Hey mate, just in case you see this; what happens next?

Broooo this was sooo good, respect to you for writing this much. Thanks for the great fic :)

Welp this story has taken my last few days of free time from me… plus some of my not so free time. Loved all of it the OC they are so engaging and time spent with them isn’t a drag like other storys.

The Queen seem a bit like a stroppy bitch at times like she didn’t know exactly what a leader would need to do then shouts at Harry for every failure when she is actively handy capping their best chance at taking out Voldy/ mentor. Also does she think that she would live to divorce Harry and win the legal battle to win custody of their daughter?

Hope this gets an ending sometime, thanks for the amazing entertainment.

Yay! The Potters are all together again!

Everyone needs a good kick to the ego now and again. Its a shame Harry's had to be so much more burtal then most

I always loved all the logistical parts of these chapters

And thus, arguably my favorite arc of the story so far is about to start

I remember one of the first times I read through this, almost wishing it'd be a "Harry Stomps everyone" type of story, but I have come to absolutely LOVE the way you showed both sides ramping up in response to each other

Now I'm wondering how the "Hogwarts Years" went, without Harry there and presumebly without Voldemort trying to come back every year

Arguably my favorite turning point in the story, in which the Enemy creates the very agent of their own downfall and destruction