Wow. Just..wow, this story is awesome. I keep drawing parallels between this and FMA, but then they get blown away by, what in my opinion, is superior storytelling, plot, and action, even if this is in what is usually a more passive medium. The action just keeps getting more and more intense, and the story is getting more and more convoluted and complex, but in a good way. Rock on, and please put the next update out soon. I can't wait to see how Harry shatters the rest of the world before rebuilding it in his image.

Awesome story so far! It caught my attention today and I read the entire thing in one sitting (while I was supposed to be studying for my test, but I don't regret it at all, your story is that good!) I can't wait for your next chapter to come out. I hope it is soon!

Keep up the good work.

Absolutely brilliant! If you took out the Harry Potter characters and names and replaced them with original characters, you would have an amazing original story! Hope you update soon! Wow!

I very much look forward to any updates you make to this story! You officially have a new fan added to your number.

I hope to read the next chapter soon~!

awesome story, i cant wait for the next chapter

I've been reading fanfiction since 2003 and rarely if ever review but felt the need to do so this time.

Amazing job.

I love this story and can not wait for an update.

Keep up the great work!

An incredibly enjoyable read !

Neville was a fantastic bad ass and I finished all your chapters in one go. Your writing is fantastic and the flow of the plot is like crack, you just can't stop. Keep it up and will be looking to read your next chapter.

In the mean time I'll be reading all your other works. Very impressed ! Your writing is definitely a notch higher than a majority of all the others.

One of the best fics I have ever read so far, please update quickly.

Although I have one question, are the powers in your fic based from the anime Full Metal Alchemists?

Harrys powers are very similar to Roy Mustang, and Neville slightly reminds me of Major Armstrong...

could be my imagination though...

wow a truely epic read, starts of slow but god damn does it build, keep up the good work and update soon V_ damn cliffies O its finally getting to the good part of the story

I don't know why, but I can't find the inspiration to continue reading this story. I think if there was a blame to put on which parts put me off, it would have to be all the religious references and 'god this' and 'god that'. Im not commenting to try and force you to change or anything, but I hear enough of religious references everyday to truly enjoy reading about it in my spare time. And if a possible reply is to try and convince me to give it another chance, the beginning of the next chapter reaffirms, in my opinion, everything stated.

lovely! I don't really know about the details int he history you are stating but I love how you are conveying the information and I can certainly see Alexander in his rise to fame. I was wondering what the Americans were doing and South America since both have a fairly large proportion of Spanish citizens or ancestors. But anyway I hope that you will continue updating, lovely story!

Fucking hell, I loved this. Are you an avid reader of fanfiction? If so, then you'd be familiar with the feeling of searching for a fic to read for two weeks and finding nothing but CRAP (or abandoned semi-crap). This was such a pleasant, refreshing surprise.

My only gripe with the story is, that, parts of it are simply unbelievable. Shit happens and it comes out of nowhere. Revelation after revelation comes, and just as you think that you got a grip on everything that's going on, BAM something completely unexpected happens. That's not a necessarily bad (or good)thing. It just seems like a clusterfuck of cohesion. And the biggest loss, I find, is the discrepancy of Harry's character. We get just a teeny, tiny bit of how his character is fleshed out, how he begins and grows and mutates throughout the years. Sometimes as I read, Harry felt like a different person in every new appearance. Was that intentional?

If you had taken the time to flesh everything out, from characterization, to the happenings in the Wizardring world, to Harry's plans, to stuff going on in the military and VOLDEMORT (which you've ignored almost completely so far) this would have been an unquestionable M-A-S-T-E-R-P-I-E-C-E.

Also it would have probably spun 500,000

words.

As it stands, 4.5/5 for a bloody fucking excellent update soon etc.

Amazing story so far, quite honestly one of the best ARs that I've come across in probably a year or so. I really like how you can see the characters growth from when they are formally introduced.

I really appreciate how you aren't trying to focus on romance or battle scenes, but the politics, maneuvering, and treachery of Harry's ascent to power. Honestly, with some story changes to avoid copyrights, this could have been a wonderful story to publish- that said, I really like that you are using the HP magic system and characters.

The whole time I was reading the last chapter, Scar's song 'Be Prepared' from the Lion King was ringing in my ears. Keep up the excellent work so far.

yes,you definitely deserve more reviews for a story so fascinating,captivating,thrilling and all around a breath of fresh amidst cliche fan writing and Godspeed.