Sir,

I really, really like this fic. It's unique (with the possible exception of 'Tyrant', which frankly is on another (smaller) scale), cold and ruthless, perfectly consistent (the date-count _really_ helps) and simply interesting.

However, I can't help but draw comparisons with your previous series of fics. First, let me start by saying that this is, without a doubt, better-written. Perhaps it was your intent, or you poured much more effort into it, or it was simply the fact that this story is less disjointed, but it reads really well. On the other hand... you're working with less characters, who are also on the whole (excluding Sirius, Harry and perhaps three more) more flat, or at least less interesting than the Dark Wars'. I think it's because this fic is colder, more analytical - this Harry is really well reflected, to the point of seeping into the story. A good thing, for this fic, but again; I can't help but compare. Even Harry Potter itself (while believable, consistent and progressing), is less nice to read. Personally, I think it's because he simply seems less nice. Perhaps you don't balance out his arrogance (on purpose?), perhaps the opposition isn't up to par (to make him shine), perhaps it's just me.

But fact remains is that where your previous fics leaned on a solid cast of characters that never failed to evoke emotions (even if the snippets were far shorter and less consistent), with a red-thread of storyline linking everything together, this one relies on military tactics and conquest. It's an entirely different kind of fic, though on the surface their summaries should look similar. I haven't yet decided whether this is a good or a bad thing. After reading five chapters, I'm inclined to say that 'different' here means equally good, trading pros and cons. However, I'm not so sure what I'd think should there be another five chapters of this length - would I grow war-weary, disenchanted with a Harry that's conquering but not nearly as lovable? Your scenario is absolutely fascinating, but the characters kind of bind me to a story. In general, the writing is much better, I feel, as is the plot (less outlandish, perfectly planned), but it's somehow less endearing in the long term.

Which isn't necessarily a problem, mind you. It's a great fic, with great writing. It's simply different than I expected considering your previous works. I tip my hat in your favour for consistently conjuring fanfics that go well above and beyond anything the normal fandom has to offer in scope, depth, detail and imagination, it's truly fascinating to read.

Thanks for writing!

Personally I liked seeing a different point of view. Would love to see what it looks like with Voldemort and the others.

Hope to see more facets. Keep it up.

By far the best piece of literary fanfiction that I've read recently. I'm seriously going to have to take a look at your Dark Wars series, when I have the time.

I see why you felt the need to write the latest chapter as non-Harry centric. The other side of the story needs to be told, after all. And Harry seems nigh unstoppable, reading the effects his plans have wrought. Truth be told, I loved it. :)

Hoping to see more of this soon.

Thanks for yet another brilliant update. This chapter provides a wider view of the events happening, rather than HP's own point of view, which gives a good idea of the developing situation. Really like Ginny's insight into HP due to their various interactions.

Looking forward to further developments from HP's POV, with his brilliant logic and stratagem...

I wish there were more fics like this, I really do.

Great chapter, really enjoyed it!

I miss having military dialog and battle plans though, but other than that it was amazing.

Sweet. Harry reminds me of a certain alchemist, now that I think about it...

Keep up the good work!

*LE GASP!* A proper Imperial!Harry fic? And with so much awesome in it! CAN IT REALLY BE TRUE!

It would appear so. I'm going to enjoy reading this so fragging much.

Very nice read your story is, very nice.

good story though i wish you would update sooner, the only thing i dont like is that ginny knows things she shouldnt.

okay so she knows a bit about the military, that doesnt mean shes capable of knowing everything harry is doing especially if sirius didnt.

it seems as if your forcing her into this role so she can be a major character further in the story but it makes more sense for a trusted friend/senior order member to recognize that harry is a threat,(like the scene with flamel and dumbledore).

it would be alot more interesting seeing dumbledore struggle to choose between what he wants to happen, whats really happening and advice from a trusted friend/senior order member.

even though it will complicate things more it would be interesting to read about what voldemort is doing and why it took so long to be ressurrected.

Thanks for the update.

great story

I really liked this chapter! It's good to get the perspective of what's going on with the other side as well. I like how your Dumbledore is right in line! I like your Ginny. She is just as ruthless as I'd expect her to be. I hope she actually either joins Potter or at least organizes a faction of her own to be reckoned with. Very cool!

Congratulations on getting into the Master's program! And Happy Birthday!

Keep up the good work!

I love this fight scene, and though realistically dual-wielding swords of any real combat heft is highly improbable, rule of cool makes "King Bradley" style combat awesome as hell. Especially when you make the character that does it some kind of Determinator that just won't stop until his objective is complete.

Meh. I don't like Ginny here. She comes rather as a Mary Sue. She seems to be dictating everything and holding all the brilliant ideas. A perfect character is a boring character, and that's exactly what you've crafted here.