Awesome...update fast!

Very, very impressive; it was certainly worth waiting for :)

I particularly found Harry's comments that he likes an intellectual equal for a girlfriend and the subsequent result, it had me laughing out loud and making my parents think I was insane (above standard levels).

cool - I like this more than the dark wars - no sense of genetic entitlement implied, just napoleonesque hard work. Given the tendency towards monarchism in Britain during crises, will the royal family be assassinated? What I mean to say is, will a power vacuum exist for harry to rise into to will it be a military coup? (napoleon versus Washington approaches)

Great story, can't wait for more.

I've personally read Tyrant by Minstrel Knight, and believe me when I say that I have no doubt this story will be as good, or even better, than his. Primarily because his works, while totally awesome, are always unfinished.

Respectfully,

Crystal Phoenix Mage

Interesting start, Im looking forward to more.

good story so far Update soon that was an inspiring speach!

Interesting start, and will look forward to who are all in Harry's cabinet, and what all the plans are for the final control to be laid down by him.

nice story! update soon

already looking forward to it

ops...guess this means I should read the end of the Dark Wars Saga's, huh?

Minstrel Knight sucks, please do not copy him in any way. He is an excellent writer he starts some great fics but he can but never finishes them, the majority of his fics are unfinished. The ideas are great

Some of his fics have not been updated for more than a year, so please do not look up of give credit to such hopeless writer. He gives a lot of bull as excuses and then disappears of the face of the Earth.

As I said before Minstrel Knight SUCKs !

Interesting and confusing at the same time. I am curious just what is going going on here, which is I suppose is the point. :)

btw has someone played "Napoleon - Total War" recently. :p

amazing beginning to what i hope is another epic story

I'm waiting for my appearance Marquis ;)

Suffice to say I liked it; and I liked the speech about "Spain in their olive fields ... etc"; it was most insightful.

Two things: First, will this story have magic in it? Or are you leaving that out and just using HP characters?

Second, a few paragraphs in you have "None were aware of the man in Holyrood Palace" but then after the italicized text you always refer to the person as 'her' going so far as to mention her breasts. I'm assuming the first reference as 'man' needs to be changed.

In any case, I'm waiting for more to see where you take this.