Crazy to think its been 6 years since this last got an update. I think this is the 3rd or 4th time I'm reading through it? Hopefully it'll get abother update someday!

One thing, you say Harry isn't the most powerful mage? Yet he is the only one using wandless magic on par with those who do have a wand (nev included), give harry a damn wand, level the playing field? I get that your going for a muggle military win, but come on nev stronger than harry? Never

Finish this goddamn story.

I have just finished this fic and I must say that you're a PHENOMENAL writer. What you've written is so realistic, I can imagine it happening. Which is what makes this so scary too, for me. I know this story hasn't been updated since 2017, but I hope that you will continue this fic. Cheers!

not a fan of the kingdom name

I'm sorry but it wouldn't be that easy to kill voldemort.

Not sure if you still visit the site. But I enjoy the sweeping. Epic of your story. Reminds me of David Weber‘s seafood series. Hopefully you come back to this and finish out the our wonderful story.

Fervently hoping this isn't abandoned. One of the best pieces of fiction I have ever read, fan or otherwise.

Wow! This is such a compelling, dystopian-style beginning.

George is being a beta so hard he has to be the alpha of betas I swear.

Its easy to claim the moral high ground and stand in judgement of others when you are looking from the outside in. Other than my disgust at her own blatant bias, someone should point out to her that it is human nature to war. It is nature's population control and so many other things. Even if it wasn't her father that lead the way, or this specific cause, it would have happened anyways.

Well, for currently reigning British monarch it is quite possible to kill anyone without facing any kind of repercussions. Whatever crime she’d commit there is no court able to perform a trial on him. Mainly because monarch exists outside of jurisdiction and doesn’t even have a British citizenship. Yep, you’ve read it right, queen or king has no passport or any other identity papers whatsoever since their existence wouldn’t make any sense from a legal point of view.

The same is not correct for other members of family though. Those are existing in British jurisdiction and can be prosecuted. Theoretically, if we’re forgetting about corruption. ;)

Didn't they already find the bombs when they did a sweep using their signature? Is this a second round of bombs? Then why are they reacting in this chapter is if it's the first round and them having more bombs was unknown, when they already found multiple? Wasn't this the rationale for them stonewalling mage negotiations? And Why are they having so much trouble finding this 2nd wave using the magical signature like they did before...?

Love how you blend magic and non magic fighting. Most writers tend to have one faction way more powerful than the others. The main thing for the mages is learning asymmetric warfare as their teleportation is perfect for that.

You’ve made Harry 5 foot 2…yet In Canon he was the same height as his dad 5 foot 10/11. I’ve never met an imposing midget before yet he’s deemed as imposing by many people in your story.

Apart from that I quite like the story. A lot of war going on though