More please

I spent an hour and a half scrolling through the filtered pages. And I am here, and i’m exited to read this story again.

Chapter 2
the year 1997 and dating without a chaperone should never happen by having supervised dating a lot of unwanted activities can be avoided. Such as sex outside of marriage. And avoid drinking alcohol.

Chapter 46
This reminds me too much of something my Uncle told me about that is very illegal both nationally and internationally. And is also what would lead to Xeno and all of the men under him and Harry's new empire government are going straight to hell. And knowing our world history and that of the Ancient history with the bane changes can't nations underwent and some border changes to boot. Anyway when Armageddon comes no human government will be left. Because Yahweh will tell Yeshua enough it is time. Plus many prophecies will have come to pass showing how close we are to The return of Yeshua the Destruction of the world governments and the end of The rebellion to our Heavenly Parent. the Universe is full of different sentient life-forms races some of that has always been loyal to the creator and those who have not. This all of humanity will finally learn the consequences of their actions. And that it is not us who decides right from wrong and good from evil.

Damn, I kinda get the feeling you were at least partially inspired by Full Metal Alchemist, turning this Harry into a cross between King Bradley and Roy Mustang.

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . . . . Mybad bruh

"Thank you, my fellow countrymen," he said genuinely. "Then, as of this moment, I am declaring that the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is officially in a state of war with the Kingdom of Spain until such a time when the enemy or ourselves are crushed."

Ahistorical and bizarre. This entire fight with Spain is ridiculous and adds nothing to the story.

Well…since no one else seems to be in a hurry to buy them, how about I sell you two of them for…say…two galleons, fifty-seven sickles, and fourteen knuts?" he proposed.

There are 17 sickles to a galleon, so this asking price doesn’t make sense.

Also, I hate all of these OCs. His muggle love interest is very annoying.
And why do you insist on calling wizards/witches “mages” throughout the story? It’s very weird and goes unexplained.
Nobody used the word “mage” in canon.

Is this story abandoned or are you just busy doing other things?

Ok, first of all, I congratulate you for your work. It is really impressive. However, I cannot read any further because for the last 5 or 6 chaptersand that is not short in your styleit has been a constant whirlwind of war. While some may like, it is unfortunately not my cup of tea. Although, as I said, this is impressive. The depth (or at least all those war strategies and stuff seemed very well-thought if not well-researched) is something I admire deeply. Have a nice life.

Very super

Guys! He's the Crimson alchemist he just reminds me so much of him the fire the name Hughes its just to much

Hoping to see something posted soon, this is too good a story to not see a conclusion!

Never have I read a fanfic with such ambition and vision. While I'll admit there are problems, such as Elicia's seemingly sudden change in regards to her relationship with Harry, and the issue of power creep, I still think this is a fantastic story. It's been several years, but I hope to see an update, or even just for you to release what notes or outlines you have to give us some sort of closure.

I love this story so much

Hmmmmmmmmmmm James Potter dueling Lord Voldemort for 2mins... I think not.

James Lilly Potter killing Lord Voldemort, huuuuh? I definitely think not. His magical or visual awareness would pick up on the runic trap spells around him and/or he would notice them casting it.

Even still Voldemort should obliterate them with relative ease, they have barely finished their Hogwarts education.