|Reviews for Building the Bridge|
| Mrs.Phineas Bogg chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
LOL! What a funny ficlet. So, it's CARSON? I keep messing up that character's name. Love how all the students are on edge trying to shovel down lunch and how they abandoned him when Ricky came. Obvious much? LOL. Significant, frightening form. That's a cool description. You captured the scene in that photo just perfectly, as well as Ricky's facial expressions. I can see this as a scene in the movie and it probably was, just cut out. Boo!
Great ending! I see another ficlet in your future, the three of them and maybe Shelly tagging along and trying to build another motorbike. Like these kids know what they're doing, right? Well, Ricky does. :)