|Reviews for Contradiction|
| penny lane chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
i loved it! it actually made perfect sense to me.
| stjimmy71396 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
that was really touching. i really like the complex idea.
| TamiLawliet chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
ICOULDNTSAYNO ! D: LOL i liked it , but mello was so harsh ! D:
| Vermillion Serpent chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I couldn't say no to baby Near's face! *squeals*
This was really interesting, I love how you made Near speak too. I really enjoyed reading it. :)
| ACP6jokerlover97 chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
I don't think that he is OOC he has a complicated mind and he said that he had issues with his emotions so I think it's perfect. Near was a bit OOC but I don't really care. It was cute :D
| x-X'Amethystte'X-x chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
I almost cried... Mello... how the hell could you DO THAT? *Bitchslaps Mello*
Mello: Dammit Ame-chan! It's just a fanfic! *Bitchslaps back*
Ame-chan: Still... I'm gonna go cry in my corner now. Incredible writing by the way, really amazing way you wrote it. :D
Mello: *Pulls out machine gun and points at Ame-chan's head*
Ame-chan: *Pulls out shotgun and points at Mello's crotch*
Hope you have a nice day! :D
| werqwerewry chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
| Mandolin77 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I was going to review anyway, but I just couldn't turn down puppy-dog-faced-Near. X. )
I loved your perspective from inside Mello's head. It was really well done, especially the way you kept switching from Mello arguing with himself to the omniscient POV where you told us what was actually happening and why he felt the way he did. You ought to stick to those Whoppers! :. D
| Near-the-end chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Aw! Can't sayno to the face! This was a good story
| Sisyphean Effort chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
I like how Mello's actions seem to contradict his thoughts. People will act out in strange ways when confronted with conflicting emotions.
That said, this was beautifully written...
| BadLiterature chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
I love Mello/Near. A MxN fanfic a day keeps the doctor away.
I think you did a very good job of keeping both boys in character. I think Mello doesn't even know what he's thinking sometimes. Or what he's feeling.
He's just pubescent. He'll grow up and run home to Near someday, huhuhu
Maybe Mello hates that he loves Near. )