Reviews for The House on Maiden Lane
lisamichelle17 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Thank you for writing this story for the contest. A few things I really loved:

I loved the supernatural theme you had. Edward and Bella as the Ethan and Beth. The love that they had was so strong and it was heartbreaking that Ethan's mom was only interested in gaining wealth. The deaths of Ethan and Beth was so tragic but I am happy that Edward and Bella are going back to the house to allow Ethan and Beth to be together one last time. The intensity of the feelings that all them had definitely showed in the more intimate aspects of this story. How Edward and Bella seemingly were drawn to each other. I also really loved the friendship between Alice and Bella.

Thank you, again, for writing this this story.
shaqbarcalis chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Awe that was so sweet! Love it!
roxymar chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
oh i loved this idea. that was just an amazing story...i didn't know what to expect but that was just awesome. bella and edward are sweet to help out an old tramatic love story. i felt so bad for ethan and beth.

-roxy
livrenae28 chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
I want to cry at just how touching this story is.

For some reason it has its grip on me!

The weird chemistry from Ethan&Beth to Edward&Bella is just too mysterious!

GREAT JOB! Please continue this story, it's going on my story alert.
nushuz4me chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Once again, your fabulous story telling pulls me in...always leaving me wanting more! Loved it!
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