|Reviews for Always and Forever|
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
REALLY hope you'll continue this after the contest.
| sweetmama77 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
This was really good - well-written and sensual - but definitely had that "To be continued" feel about it. Are you planning to write more after the contest?
| BellaLuna04 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Oh please continue this one- you cant leave me hanging!
| LCO chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Wow I love it so much!
You should continue!
| jennayg123 chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Love this story! I hope youre planning on continuing it!
| Sabelina chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
I think you should go on, if for anything just so we can see what happens when edward finds out.
| doesntmatterwhat chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Nice one, though I feel kind of sad for Bella :(
| GemmaLisax chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I really, REALLY, enjoyed reading this. It really was fantastic, the characters and the bet and the love. I have to say that I want more lol, I want to see what the aftermath of all of this is.
| AlteredLionsSacrificialLambs chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
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Ahh, don’t you just love the fairy tales? Cinderella is one of my favorites, too. So I like reading the fics that take the tale and give it a Twilight twist. This one was written for the Fun With Your Clothes On Contest.
In this one, Edward and Bella were childhood friends but grew apart when Edward moved away. He moves back later, but by then she is the unpopular girl and he’s the popular boy and they never quite strike their friendship up again.
Add in a cruel bet, evil stepmother and stepsisters, fairy God-best friends, and misunderstandings and you have a winner! Bella gets her makeover and no one recognizes her, for obvious reasons. The only time I thought it was stretching that part was when she and Edward are alone and he removes her mask. It was supposedly really dark, but he still saw enough to expound on her beauty. So his eyesight is good enough to see in the dark, but not to see who she is. Still, artistic license and all that.
I enjoyed the story and I really like how it ended. It makes me think there will be a sequel or some kind of continuation after the contest is over.
| Charlees chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
one word! CONTINUE please that's two but oh well! I love it
| duramater chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I know it wasn't your intention...but I'd def be interested in reading if you continued this story. Why was E such a douche to B after all those years?
| cmpdred chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Please for the love of all that is Edward, continue this story! I would love to see Bella's take on the evening and the aftermath of Edward's disappointment.
| ChefJayla chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
“…unicorns and rainbows..” wow you really went there. nice _wide awake_ reference. and this line "just breathe," I can picture drew barrymore entering the ball in _ever after_… you should both know that I want to throw my monitor… thanks ladies.
| twificfanatic chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Okay.. I WANRT MORE OF THIS! I mean.. you can't stop here! COME ON! I totally love this! You have to make more chappies!
| dellatwi chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
this was sweet and a lil depressing. Even if Edward was legit in asking her out she was still his second choice and also he still moved on pretty quickly with his lil spanish temptress lol it was like superman hiding behind glasses lol