|Reviews for Always and Forever|
| Peaboo chapter 3 . 6/5/2011
After finishing TLC I rushed to read this! I hope you haven't abandoned this because it has great potential and I am excited to see where you take it.
Hope all is well in your RL, and look forward to reading more!
| MelMasen chapter 3 . 5/13/2011
I love the story idea! I'm eager to see what happened when they meet again. I wonder if Rosalie will come into the mix at some point?
| VeThena chapter 3 . 4/25/2011
Ah poor Bella:-( but she's strong so this will make for a good read. Can't wait for more!
So how old is she now that the Cullens are coming back?
| A Girl Who Reads Cereal Boxes chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
I love this story, the exploration of grief and friendship is fascinating.
Hope you continue this :-)
| dirtychevys chapter 3 . 4/10/2011
Wow, Poor bella, edward turned into a jack ass and she ended up completely abandoned, scared to see what edward is like when he returns to forks, probably treats bella like shit to fit in with the evil twins
| lizard84 chapter 3 . 4/8/2011
Why did you stop writing this is good
| dohagrl chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
great chapter i hope you update soon...poor bella she lost everything like in a second...i want to know what happens now keep it up!
| Naynee chapter 3 . 3/28/2011
I hope you continue posting. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
| Svaler chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
YES YES YES. Sorry, but I screamed like a thousand time yes when I read that this story is based on Ever After, which I looked on my laptop only once. I skipped most bits of the story though, but I loved the prince/drew barrymore bits and it was so sad at the ending, because I was like, the story is ending and he's pissed at her, unforgiving, and she's foced to go with the scary french man! I love how she says: you will maintain your distance sir. And then she cuts him and says: my father thought me well. OKAY I might have repeated that bit for a few times, she was jsut so cool.
I also read that E is a player prince, whatever that means... sounds good to me! hahaha
Oh, I'm glad there's also not an immediate happy ending like you said in this a/n.
Now I'm goinng to read the story! (yeah, I wrote this before I read chapter 3...)
Oh my god, I laughed my ass of at this:
"But this is really quite delicious, Bella," Irina said. "Isn't it, girls?"
Kate mumbled something, and Tanya rolled her eye.
HAHAHAHA genious, just the fact that you came up with that xD
Oh, I didn't recognize the title She's all that, but I googled it, and this I know that movie too! Didn't he get naked at the ending of a movie because he lost a bet?
OK I also officially love you for picking those stories.
I almost cried again and again I officially love you, I'm in love with the story, it's not the usualy crap I read, you know, the ones where they meet, get an electric shot (hate that, sorry if you're planning to do that, and if I offended you, but I HATE that :P) and all those reasons... Edward is thirtheen too, right, just like Bella? Their the same age?
Though I hate reading the bits when there still young, I know what's to come! At least, i think I do...
I seriously reading the last part of the chatper at 4.
And this fan is in Holland, so we're talking AM.
AAAWHHH "I'm not crazy!" I screamed and began pacing. The orderlies hovered. Esme cried, and Carlisle looked like he wanted to. He looked like he wanted to xD
Oh, E called B on xmas, though you didn't right that bit in B's point of view. I thought Charlie would take the phone, because Bella wasn't answering the phones anymore
God you're a good writer
Ok this story deserves to by on my favorite list
and favorit author
*just walked off her bed, walked a few circles hysterically, started listening to the moulin rouge song again, after that facebook thing, so sad.. my facebook frieds are also no more then 60, 500 is just creepy...* Ok I love how he turned all popular :D
You just beated Cinderella... well, no, not yet, but it's so near, and I think you'll have me at the end of the chap or maybe the next (yes I'm reviewing while reading, it's my way for stories I love instantly)
For some reason I stop reading each time and listen to Moulin rough, or Your song, or Elephant lvoe medley
now I'm listening to roxanne... so sad. his lips caress your skin. it's morreeee then I can stand. You're free to leave me, but just don't deceive me.
I'm at the bit where e calls b when charlie died.
FUCK I had thought I had gone crazy cuz it's late, and thje computer said it's 4:54 (yes am) and my clock said 3:54 and ofcoursed it summetime! damn.
OW :(:(:( I want to cry there's no more to read.
I truly hope that you aren't plannng stopping this story, you'r etoo gifted. It's so cool, the idea in itself. Wow. Edward changed and I love it:D Though I don't understand the warning at the beginning, but I'm used to heavy stuff, so maybe I just diddn't see itxD ok it's late
after listing avril lavignes song Complicated, which fits this story, I'll go to sleep. It's 5 am...
UPDATE please! and oh, what age was she when Charlie died?I didn't get that. 15?
Oh no I'm first going to read your preface again hhaha :D
| Svaler chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
oh god at the same time I was listening to moulin rouge - your song, and I cried when this chapter ended, and I justrealized that chap1 was a prefase! duh! it probably was standing there as well but I just didn't see it. God I love this and wonder if E is back for her or really forgot her or doesnt't take that serious, I hope the second, so there'll be some challenge in the story. love it thus far
| Svaler chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
oeh I wonder how this story will turn out. I see your last review was the day after I turned 18 hehe :L At least it was at the beginning of march and you're probably still writing the story
| sassygirl156 chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
I can't recall if I've seen "She's All That," but I am definitely familiar with Ever After. Bella's got her own evil stepmother and sisters. Ugh! Doesn't sound like Edward's anywhere close to a prince, other than maybe in his own mind! I hope you choose to continue this, as I 'd like to see where it goes!
| lebells1 chapter 3 . 3/17/2011
What happens to Always and Forever? I dislike the new Edward, he's a shallow, plastic douchebag.
| lebells1 chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
Oh.. *wipe tears* It's so difficult to read a parting scene, regardless of the promises to call and keep in contact..
| jeannettecullen chapter 3 . 3/11/2011
this is a great cinderella story can't wait for next chapter i am really hooked hope u update soon.