|Reviews for Toothpaste|
| Whinnie chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
aaah , i love crackfics~ 3 . the part about chad and his stereotypical mexican food was the best though .. nice fic ! xD;
| Ola-May chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Ok so it was interesting. I'm not a big Bleach fan so I cant really say much. Structural wise it flowed alright. There were a few crazy words in there like "wastage" but hey, its a fan-fic based off an anime and anime's say weird things all the time right, so no harm no foul. Also, if Rukia isn't as dumb as she says then she should be able to know that the toothpaste wasnt astronaut food XD But I guess they dont have toothpaste in the Soul Reaper world or whatever its called.
Anyway that was pretty much it. You've got a nice writing style going on too so if you keep at it I'm certain it will get much better and even more enticing. Good luck and hoped this helped some.