Reviews for A little help from heaven
cathyscloud9 chapter 26 . 9/4
Wow! I really enjoyed reading your story! The time thing was really brain twisting for me but I had to continue reading it. Thanks!
Guest chapter 26 . 8/30
Im so happy.
5killerbs chapter 12 . 8/28
chapter 12 made me cry because it was so sad and I am a guy not a girl it's quite hard to make me cry.
wolfbane chapter 26 . 8/16
this was a good story. wish there was a bit more but it is at least a completed story.
Full moon wolf chapter 10 . 7/22
Oh no the images D: ...I wonder if anyone will destroy the picture to get rid of the mementos of...THAT...
candymanq chapter 7 . 7/4
I feel A's if naruto is monologing(?) A lot recently.
Battlesny chapter 21 . 6/20
Naruto is the Sage of Six Realms and used his DNA to have twins with his mother. does that mean those twins are the first Uchiha and Senju?
Battlesny chapter 5 . 6/20
that reminds me Breath of Fire III. what was the rooster in the game's name again?
Battlesny chapter 4 . 6/19
though Kakashi can't tell Naruto about Minato as Naruto's his father, what's stopping him from talking about him as Kakashi's sensei? also I've been wondering for a long time now, how does Naruto himself not knowing anything protect him from people like Iwa? I mean just because he knows who his father is, does that mean everyone in the world automatically learns that information as well? so the moment the Hokage tells him that his father is Minato the Tsuchikage will send out teams to kill him?
Kisaki Sakura chapter 26 . 6/10
Well, expect for one little thing one can't deny that you've done your reasearch well. And in this one point you finde the only point that ever bothered me. It was their age. As far as I know Naruto is at the Naruto Mangas about 12-13 years old. Not two years older. But then, they could have edited that in the English translation or you did this on purpose.

Expect this one thing; I liked your story much. Your writing was pleasing, as far as I can tell nearly flawless. I loved your choise in pairing as well as how you orchesterd the reappearence of Minato and Kushina. The Time Paradox was well designed and I especially adored the first and the third world.

Beside that I love the changes you did in Naru-chans Charakter. Even if the family story was kinda far fetched. But still needed to make your plot whole.

Thumbs up for a job well done.
paink1ller chapter 26 . 6/9
I like the story and read all the way to the end.


Good story but really man oww
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7
This turned into soft porn quickly...
Guest chapter 26 . 4/1
Freaky ending yo!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/31
Oh I so want to curb-stomp some Genins right now! Good chapter though.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/31
Don't get me wrong, I really like your work. But would it really kill you to use a spell-check so it doesn't look like an eight year old trying to practice typing ten-fingers blind at two hundred words a minute? It's distracting when I feel the urge to attack my monitor with a red marker to highlight the obvious blunders.
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