Reviews for Break
metrifyx chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Aw, this is REALLY cute! I love how Ven and Aqua got sunburns at the end. Thanks for the fantastic story!

The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
That was epic, well written and pretty humorous too. I hope to see more like this! D
AquaSaberXIV chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
nice one! good stroy. and yeah, like Ven says at the end, "Never listen to Terra's bright ideas!" unless you wear sunscreen anyway.
Flightfoot chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Aqua, Terra, and Ven deserve a day at the beach. By the way, you should put the complete status on this.