Reviews for Bubble Bath
jhian casey chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
i love it!
i always love lemony baths! hahah
anyway, you're awesome!
dont mind the flamers..
they just didnt know how to appreciate..
thank you and more itasaku non-mass pls!;)
moor chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
(Regarding your AN: I've always enjoyed your writing and the 'lemon skills' you have. It's a hard skill to master and you do it well.)

Enjoyed the tenderness and love you bring out in this one! Thank you for sharing!
organizationkhII chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
I've read both Shampoo and Bubble Bath, and I have to say that both are incredible! I personally don't like writing lemon but I do read some.

I've read some of your other stories as well. Your lemons are perfect because they match the characters and situation. In this story, you don't necessarily use "hard-core lemon" but more of a gentle kind, not bland yet not overly passionate. A very nice blend of both, right in the middle. Sorry, I find this hard to explain haha

Also, good job with your descriptions. A true form of "show not tell." I find that I need to improve descriptions and details in my own stories. :)

Congrats! Hope you keep writing :D
Joanne chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
'You are starting to prune' made me laugh LOL xD Itachi is so cute 3
Lady Lazy chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Awesome story- that KAYLA chick doesn't know what she's talking about- making things too detailed would just ruin the story. I, for one, love it!
peaceloveanime chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Loved the story! Tell kayla she can kiss my ass!
theonesakura chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Awww man you just have to have to make a sequel of this! I love it! I wanna see their future life and stuff :)
xXDrowningInChocolateXx chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I really liked Bubble Bath. It was really sweet. You wrote this really well. If you had made it more graphic , it wouldn't have been as good. Shampoo was really good too.
DarkAngelLida chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Wow im jealous...i want my own Itachi...He is just too beautiful
MZ.IMACHI-UCHIHA chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
this story was one of the best and shampoo was also one of the best good job with these stories
earth to earth heart to heart chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
this was funny. is there another after it?
sinq chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
your story was really good and well written. Has you said you not there to describe a porn scene and it's good like this. You show us the love between 2 characters, and it was beautifully done. Thanks for the story :)
bella chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
i was in heaven when i read this lovely )
inolongerhere chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
good job! :) its detailed plenty enough. people are just .. ew lol.

once again, good job! :D

ill throw a author subsription to your lovley workkksss :) ,.
LiluFaery87 chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
I love your stories. I think your lemons are great! Plenty Detailed. Whoever said they weren't has a sick mind. What does she expect? I love that this story has an actual plot, not just plain smut. ItaSaku smut is good though :) Great Job!
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