|Reviews for The Rapture|
| The Sinful chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
A Forsaken rogue who met with a mage huh?
| bellelethe chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Stunning imagery and pacing, very eerie.
| mirari1 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Very creepy and atmospheric! I like the ambiguity of the ending too, how it was never quite revealed exactly what Xantenise was. I think you painted a very vivid portrait of what it would be like to live under the protection of the Crusade in Lordaeron. Very cool apocalyptic setting. Anyway, I hope you write more, about these characters or others!
| Victoria Levi chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Nicely done. You really had my attention the whole story though.
| ether chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Loved this! Very well written, very engaging. You really captured the feeling of being in the isolated, barely-there town, scrabbling at life and with little news of the outside.
The ending left me very curious...
| Nenunial chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
You wrote a ton! It just made my day, reading it all. I just wish that the characters could have taken a bit more action. Maybe a spell?
| Adelain chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
This is a great story, but you might have made Lyrell do something Mage-like to show that she was one, because you really couldn't tell.