Reviews for Overriding Orders
quintilis chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Is it maternal instincts that tell Florina that it'll be a girl? Nitpicking aside, this was really cute! Kudos to you!
patattack chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
This "piece of writing" may have no point, but I still enjoyed it. Very good.
Sw0rdmaster chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Heh. Very nice.

You drew out the color in both of their characters. I can definitely see Florina just sort of absorbing it at first, not having the guts to say anything about it, then just suddenly letting Hector have it. And of course, he's oblivious, going about under the assumption that all is well.

A fic well done. *thumbs up*
Puritey chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Cute
SpeedDemon315 chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Hahahaha! This was such a light, humorous piece. I loved it when Florina told Hector off and demanded him to stop clucking around her like a mother hen. And his reaction afterwards about getting a daughter...priceless. XD
Xirysa chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
BWAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA.

Pregnant!Florina for the win. For the win of all wins, actually. SO AWESOME.

I CAN ONLY HOPE THAT I REACH THAT LEVEL OF AWESOME WHEN I HAVE KIDS.

AND THAT AWESOME IS HEREDITARY.

But I digress.

Aw, concerned!Hector is too cute. Actually, that should be concerned-soon-to-be-father!Hector.

Then again, considering what happened with Ninian, I suppose he has every right to be-though Ninian's death was also do to other circumstances, ya?

So yes. This was cute. That is all.

[Xirysa]
Trevor X chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
You go Florina! Tell that idiot husband of yours how things should work!

Another great work, Manna!
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Hello again, KK. Since I saw this up I thought I'd review as well.

Anyways, this is really good! Of the two fics from you I reviewed today, I think I prefer this one :) Hector and Florina were both in-character, as it was really believable how Florina would finally get fed up with Hector's (admittedly well-intentioned) nagging...and of course, it's understandable why he would feel that way, given canon. Ninian...;_; Anyways, nice work :D
Pen and Paper71 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
I really loved reading this. The way that Florina stands up for herself here is just perfect. I love the way Hector and Florina interact in this.

I particularly thought that the scene with the allusion to Ninian's death followed by Florina's promise to Hector was really well presented.

Perhaps my favorite part though is Florina and Hector arguing over their future daughter's fate if only because it amused me.

Excellent work!
Frog-Lizard chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Frog: That was cute. Florina talking back to her husband XD Not something you think of everyday, but if I were in that position, I'd probably do the same.

Nice job ;)