Reviews for Ice Box
Autumn chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
Ash, how the hell could you talk to Dawn like that. I'm gonna strangle you if you continue to act like a jerk to her. Are we clear?
Autumn chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
Awesome story. I like it so far :)

keep it up
BattleWithYourHeart chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
Wow Ash is so...dark

poor Dawn, lets hope she can get throught to Ash

but yeah I agree, I mean getting betrayed by the person you loved and your best friend? I don't blame Ash for acting like this.

Great job! :D
Jigglypuff chapter 4 . 5/14/2010
Ash, you- I'm speachless. How could you talk like that to Dawn?
Jigglypuff chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
Does this the Pokeshipping is over? Yayy! Pearlshipping FTW!
Jigglypuff chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Ohh, nice story.
Mukukuku chapter 4 . 5/12/2010
I like the story, keep it up!
xStart.a.RIOTx chapter 4 . 5/12/2010
Ash...why? I'm going to strangle you if you keep acting like a jerk!

meh...but nonetheless, I know he's still gonna be a jerk in the next chapter xD

anyway, this chapter was really great! it wasn't even that short (;

and when Ash talked back at Dawn, I was like "what the heck?" too, haha xD

the story's getting really interesting now!

I can't wait for the next chapter ;D
Gerbilftw chapter 4 . 5/12/2010
No! You didn't make Ash dark! You only made him mean :(

If you're going to make him dark you need to make him cold and give short answers without raising his voice :)

Anyway, a good and emotional chapter! I'll look for the next one!
EarthBolt-Infinite chapter 4 . 5/12/2010
Wowee...

I must say, Dawn's consolation attempt was written far better than I expected, and that is saying something.

Ash's cold attitude strikes my heart more than expected. Poor Ash, poor Dawn. Although she seems to understand the peril he's been through.

Hell, EVERYTHING here exceeded my expectations, which were high to begin with.

Superb job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter even more!

Daijobu!
Nauran chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
This is getting pretty dark. It looks like we won't see the real Ash for a long time. Hope they can bring him back.
Genny35 chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
Okay I'm not going to lie but this chapter is so...

... ...Awesome!

Ash starts to act like a jerk to hide his real feelings. I also would be pissed if some one cheats on me. I would kick his *** if he does!

Anyways again this was a great chapter!

Hope you update soon!
Mizz Nikki chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
Wow Erin, This chapter was great!

Very well written and the drama was great too. Poor Ash is absolutely crushed. I feel bad for the poor guy.

And poor Dawn.. she's caught in the middle of this whole thing and she's so hurt too. At least she'll be there for Ash.

This story is so so touching, I love it. I cannot wait to read more. Keep it up :D

Daijobou Erin Daijobou!
Crimsonlink310 chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
Awesome chapter no doubt lol. Great job Princess no grammar errors and the drama was good. Now Dawn just needs to heal Ash and become his girlfriend and we are good although a whole bunch of crap is gonna happen in between lol. Well until the next chapter chaos out.
Currie-Sauce chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
WOW! Great Story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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