Reviews for Poverty and Riches
Guest chapter 7 . 11/20/2010
I love this story, but are you going to update again soon? Please, please do so
Lily-chan chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
learn to write descriptively. your first few paragraphs are crude and raise many questions. is temari strong or not - is she proud or defeated? why are they being kicked out? why does gaara not believe in love? why is the king there at all? it sounds like he'd be lazy and not bother to do anything if the soldiers do all the work.

you're inconsistent and messy in your writing style and your dialogue and inner thoughts aren't believable. i'd do a bit more fine-tuning before publishing future chapters, even if it's only online.
Love Is Only a Word chapter 7 . 7/30/2010
wow i love it.

Plz update as fast as possible with this and bloody rose...i like both. I hate Ino too. I love the storyline and how everything is turning out so far. Update soon plz
Jacky D Blade chapter 7 . 7/28/2010
WoW!

This is drama!

Hpefully they can do it in tim ...

Please update soon!
Joja-Lee chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
this stories cool so im adding it to my comunity:Best naruto stories ever _ keep up the good work!
Krabkrab chapter 5 . 7/9/2010
Update. It's been far too long since you have.
tasha chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Wow dramatic update update soon.
Fired Feathers of a Pheonix chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
*Gasp!* OMG i did not see that coming! (Ok, yeah I did since you spolied it for me!) Whatever, good chappie as always, I u sissy~!
Aka Aurora chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
Well I REALLY LUFFED this chapter...sorry I didn't review for the last chapter(I read it)...Well I had exams about two weeks ago or more and it was horrible...4 days of sitting at a desk for 3 hours...Well this chapter is VERY well written...and descriptive;especially when expalaining Temari's dress...Well this fic keeps getting better with more chapters

~Aka Aurora~

PS:Good luck with the exams...and have patience for the exams..
Guest chapter 4 . 5/6/2010
XD i luved Gaara's thoughts again... as usual.

Write more - I loved the chappie~
sasha chapter 4 . 5/6/2010
please update soon
everyoneno1 chapter 4 . 5/3/2010
This story got better by ten fold. I LOVE THIS! I am now like stalking this story. Amazing! KEEP IT UP! *Lee's thumbs up pose*
Fired Feathers of a Pheonix chapter 3 . 4/29/2010
Aw, I liked it! (srry it took 4eva 2 read tho) Man, There were some bitch wars in this one! lolz Sari and Ino, I mean.
Temari should slap her back! WHOO! XD Continue~
Aka Aurora chapter 3 . 4/27/2010
Well I really do like this fic...so dscriptive and well written, and i like the writing style(word usage and blah,blah,blah)...well the fic is developing quite nicely actually if you have writer's block use real life expeirences and use that as a base where you can build off to get ideas...this fic is AWSOME...yup you just got one of my signature AWSOMES which has all caps and is purposely spelled wrong(cause I'm AWESOME)..it pretty much means:awsome fic,love the fic,how inspiring, and my favorite meaning...I AM NOW OFFICIALLY OBSESSED WITH YOUR FIC...well good luck with this fic and future fics :D
Fired Feathers of a Pheonix chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
XD I luved Gaara's POV! _

I told you I read ur stories!

You didn't believe me!

Haha, you thought I was mad.

You better give me a hug 4 this review~

-Your fav sissy

-XxGaaraXRukixX
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