Reviews for The Island
M chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
i think the plot is interesting, but i find bella's character immature & quite dramatic. i don't really like your style of writing, either. sorry dear.
tricklem chapter 24 . 8/11/2011
enjoyed the story, and look forward to reading the outtakes of Edward's POV
twilight4everrules chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
perfectly written. The plot was great and intresting. Loved reading! Awesome work! -liz
Christy Wooley chapter 24 . 7/16/2011
This was without a doubt one of my FAVORITE fanfics. i started to get bored with most of the stories on here until i read "The Island". i cant wait for you to post Edwards part of the story. Thank you for writing this :)
Obliviate7 chapter 24 . 7/15/2011
This story is absouletly samazing, I was an avid follower and now having an account can finally add it to my favourites and give a proper review. This story is definetly one of the best here!
All black and white chapter 7 . 7/9/2011
Ummmmm... I'm a little confused... If Edward has been living on the island for 94 years avoiding human contact why is house all sleek and modern? Wouldn't it be at least be a little out dated? CD didn't exist 94 years ago either... He also can't tell humans he's a vampire even if they are "stuck" there with him ;) I don't think he would want Bella to know he's a "monster" either and realistically she should be more distressed that she is stranded on a island with a guy she dosen't even know that saw her naked without her consent. At the very least because she doesn't know for sure if her father made it back alive. You do have a really good idea going here and a nice skeleton of a plot going. Everything is pretty well written as well. You just might want to look some things over again. :) Sorry if I offended you by writing this it wasn't ment to be a flame or anything of that sort. Please keep writting! You really do have a great start. :) :D
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 23 . 3/27/2011
This story has been a delight from the beginning to end, I'm always happy to hear you have an update! I'd love to hear EPOV when he was off the island, away from Bella. Also, no children yet. Let Bella and Edward play and enjoy life before all that starts! Truly wonderful story, thank you! :)
ressax chapter 24 . 3/26/2011
This story was very sweet. I'm sad that it's finished. I like the epilogue, a very sweet moment.
xx chapter 24 . 3/24/2011
most amazing story ever , i loved it
Luna Shoane chapter 24 . 3/23/2011
This was a wonderful story, and I'm sad to see it end, but I must say you did a very good job with it, better than I could have ever done. You are truly one of the most dedicated authors on FanFaction.
misslaurielou88 chapter 24 . 3/23/2011
i loved this story and loved the ending :)
emeraldstarforever chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
thanks for mentioning me!


emeraldstarforever chapter 24 . 3/23/2011
lovely ending... never thought that renee would have another daughter... keep writing great stories!

Will be sad to see this story go...


xxx :)
7HockeyStarVampireObsessed7 chapter 24 . 3/23/2011
Great chapter.

Great ending.

Great story!

I love this story and i love this ending, it wax perfect. Better than me imagining bella falling off the boat again :P

Yay! New story! But I have some major testing if I want to pass high school in 30 min and I'm still not at school...sooooooo it will have to wait until I get back home :(

Oh and math homework is horrible! I feel for you, I didn't understand mine :(

Haha great story, I can't wait for the outtakes :)
KyF777 chapter 24 . 3/22/2011
haha loved it like always!yay fanfiction is working lol your amazing at writing haha great job:) yay i was mentioned! :) haha amazing :) ok cant wait for the outtakes! ok bye haha xoxo:)
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