Reviews for A Rabbit's Freedom
MythicalCreature03 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
... *tear*
Jeanne'sWhiteRose chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
._. foreshadowing. it be ominous. but the rest of it was cute X3
bbissocute chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Wonderful job, truly. Very touching scene between the two of them.
Crystalgurl101 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Is it weird that I cried at the end of this story? ;_; This was SO cute and sweet and absolutely adorable! The foreshadowing, of course, was just so sad. Poor future-Arthur! :'( For a first, this was wonderful! You did a beautiful job! :)
PoisonousTiger chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Aww. This was wonderful! I love family bonding stories! They always make my heart feel good inside. This also made me sad because it was a more innocent time for these two.

Your description and dialog was excellent; I found myself easily getting carried away in the story. Thank you for making this an enjoyable read by watching your spelling, punctuation, and so forth (you'd think these things don't make a difference, but they really do).

Hmm. So the order that the characters are listed in dictates whomever is the dominant personality in the relationship? I did not know that. Interesting.
Mister Melancholy chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Awwww... This was amazing. I just loved the reference to America's leaving and the Revolutionary War. That always have me in tears, but this was so flufftastic at the same time. So now I'm both happy and sad-ish. 0A0

By the way, I like UKUS too. I prefer it over USUK. I just think it makes a lot more sense, even if England does have a bit of uke-ish tsundere qualities to him. America does too anyway. xD Haha, but I digress... Good job!

~ MM
Sasuke0099 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
This is such a cute story! I love it and it almost made me cry !
chrono-contract chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
wow! very deep! XD i love it!
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Definitely a forshadow-moment! I loved the discription of Alfred you had, especially when Arthur was thinking of him! - So cute!
xxXSporkSistaXxx chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
TT_TT Oh goodness gracious lord almighty, do you know how to make my heart break into a bajillion little pieces...

that. was. too. sad/precious/lovely/foreboding/just oh my gosh!

This is really amazingly well written for your very first official fanfiction- great job! This story is beautiful, and the connection between these two is mind-blowingly telling.

:D *big hugs*
Soot chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
aw! that was so good! well written!