Reviews for The Rift
whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
This was absolutely gorgeous. Wow. I loved this a lot. :D

you have such a way with words. Hope to read more from you soon
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Very well written piece.
GixieChic chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Your prose is absolutely stunning
rainoverthehill chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
it was is not easy to write a love between characters as different as these, but legolas and gimli were great like this. i liked, that they didn t meet in this story and legolas just watchs. thank you!
Ron Bronwen chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
This can't be the end of this story...oh come on...I want more! PLEASE!
Marchwriter chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
How beautiful a piece is this? So clearly does Legolas' POV come across. This story is a jewel in itself, so convincingly written and with such depth of feeling, I felt Legolas' wonder as my own.

The only critique that jarred me momentarily from the story was the sentence: "Nothing is unchanged."

I think you meant "Nothing is changed," meaning Gimli is not changed. "Nothing is unchanged" is a double negative meaning everything is changed, but the sentence after that, that something is different about him in the light of Lorien, would seem to belie that statement.

A lovely story all around.


Andalusia25 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
This is great, excellently written, great imagery, as was your last, but its marked 'complete', surely that was just a wrong click of the mouse, right?