|Reviews for Love's Desperate Measure|
| Becoming-Obsessed chapter 3 . 9/9/2010
Love it! Amazing as always!
You never let me down!
| Love is Evil chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
hey, i really think you should continue this story. i have some experience with abuseand have also read many fics with the abuse plot. yours is not only written very good but it contains also the most accurate info and idea since i specialised in this theme. i really hope i can read it until the end.
| Zaliya Lily chapter 3 . 8/21/2010
so far i like the story and how it draws the reader into it. can't wait till i can read more and find out how the story is going to go from here.
| XxXSilverShadowXxX chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
I know that the problem with that other review was resolved and all but you really shouldn't stop writing this story. I like it a lot so far and I have also read 'Someone to Protect Him' and based off the two stories I've read you're an excellent writer. Your stories aren't rushed or ridiculous or anything like that and I respect. There are so many people who try to write stories like this that just don't do their research and it turns out to be less than respected, so I really hope you continue writing thiss tory.
| cookyc chapter 3 . 8/14/2010
| LadyPhoenix731 chapter 3 . 7/24/2010
I honestly think you should ignore that piece of crap called a constructive criticism and continue the story. I would love to read more, and I think you're a great author. I have read some of your other stories and I think they're great pieces of work. Your writing is detailed so that I can picture in my mind what's going on as I read, which, I feel, is the mark of a good author, and I really can't wait to read more. Please don't abandon this story, that so-called critic is a hack.
| Azrael Blood chapter 3 . 7/23/2010
Aww! Sadish but it's going somewhere unlike some stories that suck and make no since. Thanks!
| ALittleBitSofterNow chapter 3 . 7/16/2010
I read your author's note, and am extremely angry at this person who wrote the incredibly insulting flame. I encourage you to write more, this person isn't the only one who will read your story, and I've read a couple of your other stories, and they are REALLY good. I mean seriously, this many reviews with only three chapters is really good, and besides, there are always those people who won't like your writing. That doesn't mean that you aren't a good writer. I've read a lot of fanfiction, and you are a really good writer. So many people have bad grammar, and if they write badly, well, they wrote it, and if they're happy with it, then fine. I for one, like this story a lot and would like to see where it leads. It seems very interesting. I've always liked the Harry with Charlie or Bill pairing. I like them as characters, and they are wicked cool. Hope to see another chapter soon! See ya.
| Chompekitas chapter 3 . 7/16/2010
I really, really like your story. It's simple as that, but the main reason is that you have taken a very "dark" and difficult theme to write about and from my point of view, you have done it in a very realistic and educated way. Many people don't like to read stories with so much reality, but in the end, what you expose here is real sadly.
To educate people about something as strong and difficult as this, you don't sweet it. If you don't like something then don't read it, that's my advice for those that doesn't like the way the theme is approached.
You need to have confidence in your work, in your talent, believe me you are doing a great work. Your style is different and for me very refresing. It may has to do with the fact that my experiences and my age let me see things from a very different point of view, but believe me, I can be a very difficult reader.
Congrats in a very well and thoughtfull story, as this one, also in taking your time investigating and researching for your story, it tells a lot about an author.
I'm dying to read more.
| CM-x-SN-x-HP-x-roxmysox chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
dont let some reviewer stop you from doing what you are so terribly good at...I have just finished reading all of your work and you have extreme talent...keep up the good work and please update your stories soon...
Absolutely amazing working
| vylin00spunx chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Firstly, I would like to tell you what a magnificent writer you are. You have lots of talent, and your sense of imagination is very profound. Your style is intriguing, and you are able to bring out different personality aspects from characters that I never really considered.
It's important to realize that there are lots of different people that make up this world. Some people tend to live in a sense of "safety" and try to zone out concepts of abuse, and other "sensitive" things - according to them, it's not part of their life, and they shouldn't bother with that at all.
Please don't take that flame to heart, remember: that reviewer has nothing that you want. After all, you merely write for your own pleasure, right? This is supposed to be a free world (well, depends where you're sitting at right now...), you shouldn't bother to write just to keep this one particular person happy for you!
In fact, writing is a special skill, a talent that is very hard to develop. I can clearly see through your works that you have come a very long way, and I'm extremely happy and proud of you. Don't ever lose yourself into chasms of despair because of that flame - that person is simply unable to comprehend and accept different aspects of reality.
I look forward to seeing more works published by you, and I hope that you haven't stopped writing - you're too good to stop.
| diesedame chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
i love all your stories(:
| Emerald Harkness chapter 3 . 6/15/2010
Another good story. I love how dark you make stories even though most wouldn't. I hope your back is doing better. Keep writing cause i find your plot and charater realtionships really well
| Kimpatsu no Hoseki chapter 3 . 6/10/2010
I seem to find myself enjoying all of your stories and hope that you continue updating them.
| ash.ash.ash.ash chapter 3 . 6/10/2010
this is an amazing story so far, i can see great protential!
please don't let some a hole reck the writing experience for you.
Writing should be what ever you think or feel or make up.
It do not need to suit others, as long as your happy thats all that matters :)