Reviews for A Little Bit
Gohanrox chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
I loved this! Cute and funny. U really passed the test on getting future 18's personality. Good job.
Saber Wing chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I loved it. This pairing has always been unbelievable to me, but you've written it in a way that seems realistic, and very possible. Great job _
Spirit of paladin chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
This is not bad at all, you did a good job.
FanficMogul chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Understandable, but so damn OOC for M.18 (not pr.18, get it?), that it gets out of my logical limits at times. The writing is great, nice work. And you did a good job on the beta _, but proofing your own story is not called beta-ing cuz it comes from Beta-reader & you're the writer... _

And yeah, AFAIK, 18's and Trunks' ages/birth times don't change in the two timelines... so the age diff factor esp. she is older...
ultimatedragonballzfan chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
I can't imagine 18 ever likeing Trunks. It's seems weird, but possible.

I liked how u described how 18 felt. Very well written :)