|Reviews for Sorry|
| Jenn1 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
It was nice fic. I think it would make me ship a couple I don't even remember since I haven't seen the show in years. :) But I guess it's too bad they didn't gave a scene even a little bit like this one.
| Enbrethiliel chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I don't mind that Frank seems "out of character" because you're right that it's plausible that he'd be different when alone with Kristen. But I don't know about Kristen. We've seen her alone with Gary in one episode and it was implied that she was alone with David in another; she comes across as flirty and not really serious about going steady with one guy. I think your premise has real potential, but that Kristen needs more fleshing out.
Also, I don't really think having their thoughts in italics is really necessary. I'd say your dialogue and descriptions are strong enough for the subtext to be clear. )
Will you be continuing this? It would be interesting to see how you make it fit other episodes, especially since Frank would have more to be jealous about than Kristen.
| delete-account-please 742011 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010