Reviews for Last Night
DAngel7 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I think the story is good. I would not mind if you write sequel, will you? ]
ppeach2 chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
It was okay for a SauHina there wasn't much of it in there. It was more Sakura broke up with Sasuke and Hinata doesn't really comfort she just offers to. I think a sequel would be nice it would make it more complete because quite frankly the only SasuHina in this is Sauke checking Hinata out and also your ending isn't all that great so this definitely calls for a sequel. ]
lissibear chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
You have a really good premise, maybe you could round out the end a little more to give a little more resolution and connection with Hinata...Idk. Also is there a word count? If not, you could expand on Sasuke's feelings afterward and his meeting with Hinata b/c right now I would say it's a SasuSaku fic b/c as the reader I'm more involved with them, especially as a couple. I woudn't normally be this critical, but you said you entered it into a contest, or you're going just some things to think about. It's good though, I don't want you to freak out and be like omg she hates or it's awful b/c it's not, I just want you to win, lol. So I'll stop now...okay, love your stories btw. ;p