Reviews for Training the New Help
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I expect training the Marauders was not fun for Moody-after all, their own experience was in beating up on someone four on one, with the help of a magic map and the Cloak. Of course they're going to think it's all a game. Good one-shot.
Namiko-kii chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Really interesting to read.
Il'Diko chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I love your take on the First Order! Moody is brilliantly done, great characterisation. Oh and I love the Prewetts, and also Marlene (though she did not get too much spot light). Ooh and I'm dying to read more about old man Pettigrew (and I would be thrilled to read a story about Peters betrayal from you, interesting plot line you have began here...).

A brill story and a fav. :D
Princess Gillybean chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Loved it. He was so cranky and fantastic, and the boys messing around. I loved all the different interactions. It was realistic and fabulous and I really enjoyed reading it.
Kyria of Delphi chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
You got him down perfectly. Except for the chewing tobacco?

Very good. The anger and the concern are exactly right. Thanks for this. Great job.
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Well, anything with the Prewetts in has to be good in my book. And your Alastor Moody is just wonderful. Anotehr good 'un.