Reviews for imprinted
Tabs chapter 8 . 10/4/2010
Heyy!

This is my first time ever reviewing your story but yeahh...

I like your stories it keeps going and never allows me to click the red cross button until I finish a chapter.

I love it! (:
aby bribed me chapter 8 . 9/27/2010
NICE STORY~~

tho i thought jacob was like super heavy and buff, so she couldn't pin him down, but whatevaass
Guest chapter 5 . 7/31/2010
Awesomesauce story ur a pretty good writer and i read all the stuff about rewiew so just to tell u I'll read but I'm not much of a reviewer so I just wanted to tell u u have a fan and to ask u to write the next chapter
Mollie chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
I really love this story. I am so glad that jacob and alex are finally an official couple. It's so sweet. I really didn't want that chapter to end. I am glad that finally someone is writing a fanfiction about Jacob where he doesn't imprint on renesmee. Keep on writing this story because I LOVE it and I really really really want to know what happens next.
Mollie chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Wow. I like this story. It's different from other stories and that's what makes it good. And alex is wierd. I think she is good for Jacob.
Nicole chapter 5 . 7/9/2010
Hi chelsea! :DDDDD gr8 story rite mre. Bye chelsea! See u at sch!

xxxxx Nicole xxxxxx
Amanda chapter 5 . 5/16/2010
i really enjoy ur story!
caleb's babe chapter 5 . 5/16/2010
No please don't stop this story...I love it. i'm just very bad at review a chapter or remembering too. but i do really like your story. love jacob. and I cannot wait for the next chapter. hopefully you get more reviews.
Lilnekoaly chapter 5 . 5/16/2010
go on an update
kimmmz chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
This is still good, but I can't help but get a little annoyed at Alex. I think it's the way she act's as if she's good at everything, you know? 'I don't need you like a guard dog watching me all the time. I'm pretty sure I can kick you're ass right now…' although I can see you're trying to make her a strong character (which I love!), you just have to be careful with it. What she said about him being a guard dog comes of harsh, and I really don't like her being so mean to him when he's being so lovely to her.

But this is still good, and I think you should carry on writing. The more you write, the more readers you get. When I first started a story I had like 2 reviews for the first 10 chapters, and now I've gone over the 500 review mark, so stick with it. Because I know how disheartaning it is when you get no reviews :) You might want to check out the story stats because you may be having a bunch of people reading this, just not a lot of them reviewing. I've also had that - like 100 people reading a chapter, and then four reviews. What's up with that?

Oh, and when you have different readers but a paragraph break in. It makes it flow more and then everything isn't bunched up in big pargraphs.

And I was totally cringing when she met Jacob's dad - brilliant!

Anyway, great chapter :)
sillypeople chapter 5 . 5/16/2010
im sure lots of people are reading your story... i am!
chiickiie joanne chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
omg this is sooo long. ok i shall review bcos no ppl review..

i like this story! :DDDDD though i dun get why he mus hide the fact that he is a werewolf.
Pamela Khoo chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Great and interesting story, but i do not really understand the part on "Alexandra pov". However, i still enjoy reading this story but it seemed a little too long and i was quite impatient and unwilling to finsish reading thw whole story. i suggest that the story should be shorter. Overall, it is a good story with lots of great descriptions and adjectives which anticipates the reader. Thank You, and keep up the good work! :D:D:D
kimmmz chapter 3 . 5/7/2010
Another great chapter :) You just need to calm down your writing, as it seems a tad bit rushed, and go into more detail abou things. But apart from that, this is really good.

Update soon! :)
kimmmz chapter 2 . 5/7/2010
Ahh, I loved 'I mean what kind of girl owns a Porsche and is broke?

Jacob

What kind of girl owns a Porsche and goes broke?' soo much, I laughed my butt off.

And I'm also glad that she didn't spill all her information out at him at once. I hate OC's who act all 'pity me, pity me!' so I liked that.

I also loved that he followed her and I laughed when he said he felt like Edward.

And I was proper relieved when she started rambling! I love charcters like that - perfect characters annoy me to no end.

I really loved this chapter so much, it was adorable! And Jacob is so cute. This story is getting so good already. Brilliant writing! :)
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