|Reviews for Help|
| Caveat Lector 52 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
So "that's" how Mpreg works!
This is so great, but in such a weird way. Equal part funny and WHF inducing.
| with the monsters chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
This was so weird, but in a really hilarious way. I really enjoyed how you subtly took the mick out of all those male pregnancy stories, and Mary-Sues, and all that. To be honest, I thought this was absolutely brilliant, even if it was odd. I loved "Carpacia" - she was just perfectly irritating, I had to love her.
| iMissHP chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Britain is odd XD
It's really hilarious, and crazy! I love it!
But what happens in the Ravenclaw tower should stay in the Ravenclaw tower.
*shivers at the thought of what happened in the common room some years before*
| semi sweet goddess chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Hilarious. I like what you did with each of the characters.
| xabandonedaccountx chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Hilariously ridiculous! Your Mary-Sue was lovable and the protection was priceless. Snape and Luna were fabulous.
| Princess Gillybean chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
That was hilarious. :) I loved the ridiculousness. Snape was fabulous. and Luna! she was awesome.
The American transfer student was great as well, that conversation with Ginny! fantastically scarring job as always :)
| Julia Claire chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Oh, goodness, I don't even know what to say...
I thought your OC and the part with Cedric were the best bits, and I'm still laughing about the part with the British water.
| FirstYear chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I started to count the number of laughs.. starting at "like that's ever stopped you,"... but lost track along the way.
I loved the OC's name, and her physical description, but swear I've actually seen it before, so sad.
The whole thing is great and I am sure as we read through HP, looking for a good story we will remember this every time we start on another piece of tripe.
| respitechristopher chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Oh, my. Sara, Sara, Sara...
This is so terribly, terribly wrong in so many wonderful ways. From the MPreg to your amazing (and Lecherous!) Snape to your American OC to your queer Weasleys to - just wow.
And Luna looked the sanest out of everyone. This should really give you an idea that you're on thin ice here.
Personally, I think the next story should be an investigation into what the hell *is* in the water in Wizarding Britain. But yeah, I approve wholeheartedly.
You're going to a bad, bad place for writing this, my dear. Save me a seat, will you?
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Sara, you have excelled even your own high standards for hysterical evil. This is the funnisest thing I've read in about 100 years... I adore your Mary Sue, Ron's reaction, the flashing scar, the Ravenclaw coven dealing with the problem... But I think Cedric as Remus and Lily's son takes the cake. Wonderful.
I am going to put this into the restricted section of the Hogwarts Online Library, so as not to scar innocent young minds.