Reviews for Moving On
Aline7921 chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
I'm looking for authors of kaixshin stories , which I translated into German and then upload to on .

If you are interested write me a message . I would be happy. )
aruma.conan.kaito chapter 3 . 9/3/2015
Hey! 28 April is my birthday! Did kaitou kid gonna appear on my birthday!?
Avatar.NIX chapter 22 . 8/19/2015
This was definitely an interesting read and I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the epilogue since I'm a sucker for happy endings. (And the fact that KID decided to steal Ekoda High's mops of all things was hilarious. xD) There were parts like Mr. Creep and, well, really, Mr. Creep was the worst part. *shivers* Well, actually, it tied with Ran's death because that was heartbreaking. I'm thankful though that she accepted Conan as Shinichi before passing on and that she went as a hero because she really is an amazing person. Also, Kogoro shaping up and being a father-figure for Conan was a nice touch since it's nice to see them in a good relationship. That aside, in regards to Mr. Creepy's crimes, I have to admit that Conan's mental fortitude was surprising since a part of me expected him to shy away from physical contact for at least a while. I guess he's even stronger than I'd expected? Also, I like how Pandora wound up being some unknown gem and so KID's theft went unnoticed by the public since it lets him continue with his games, haha. All in all, very nicely done and thank you for writing and publishing this story! ;3
Shana-Fujioka chapter 22 . 6/11/2015
Well done! I really liked this story. At first I wasn't sure what to think with Conan not being able to see blood and the entire timeline having changed, but I got used to it pretty fast and it got even more interesting afterwards. :D
The Tantei-Baka, the fuming Hattori who's oblivious to KID being Kaito, and the blushing Conan were really funny. And the special really made me laugh, the idea with the mop was ridiculous. xD
Jennosaur chapter 22 . 2/25/2015
The ending was pretty abrupt, but I fully enjoyed this fic :) Keep up with the good work!
NobodiesTears chapter 5 . 2/22/2015
Sooooo... Let me get this straight. Kaito, Aoko and Hakuba are all actually ten years younger than Shinichi. Everything that happened in detective Conan is ten years prior to this story. Instead of chasing Kaito, Conan chased Toichi. Interesting. Sad, but I like how beautifully it flows .. Awesome sauce job!
Nobodiestears chapter 3 . 2/22/2015
Numbers as letters:
On 4/28/2010 I will be taking the star that is currently located in Mitsui Museum. I will come when the hands meet the starts together.

( I'm guessing "hands meet the stars" is midnight. Clock hands pointing up to the stars. Clever :) )
last 1 standing chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
line 3 third word first letter 3 is c not 2 b
bome or come
love ur story
Detective2Conan chapter 17 . 7/7/2014
Yay!
kittyfinatic515 chapter 22 . 6/5/2014
Lol omg the mops! XD
Detective2Conan chapter 6 . 4/15/2014
Says who mwhahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Nebula'sPhoenix chapter 22 . 4/5/2014
Bwahahahaha this was the first fan fictions to make me crack up so much! Kaitou was so funny! XD
farawisa chapter 22 . 3/9/2014
*iz laughing sooo hard* because your daughter always uses them to beat him up! lol! loved the story. thanks for sharing!
majishan chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
i was crying in the prologue! poor conan didn't deserve to see ran getting killed in front of him! :(
Conan02 chapter 22 . 1/29/2014
Thanks for creating this story!
I hope you creat others just like it!
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