Reviews for Addiction
Akai Naiya chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I liked how this turned out it was very cute!
shaphat chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
I loved it! it was short but real sweet. I'm adding it to my faves
Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
D'aw, gotta love MxM.
Deadly Nightshade1395 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I absolutely love the pairing and good job! It's a solid idea...so...s'mores? And a picnic? I'm up for it...
TearFilled3y3s chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I liked it alot! MelloxMatt is one of my favorite couples. Also I liked the story by itself. The idea of a couple helping eachother overcome addiction is good! (maybe a tad cliche but I like it!)
dramaq chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I like the idea. The whole eachothers addiction conclusion is so cute! Gawd I love this couple (they're my fav )

The way they spoke seemed believable, however, I think the actual dialogue was a bit rushed. I have a feeling that Mello might take some more convincing to give up his beloved chocolate. And, oh yes, I mean CONVINCING. ;) Also, I think it may have been more powerful as a scene rather than a summary of the on going issues. You could have incorperated bits from the past in their diaologue. Keep up the good work! I like the way you think, so I'll be looking for more of you ;)