Reviews for The Dragon in the Malestrom
Screamindivr145 chapter 2 . 2/1
Ok, this is a great idea, but I just can't read it due to the fact that you hardly put ANY punctuation in. It's run-on sentence after run-on sentence. As amazing as the idea for this story is, I'm stunned you don't understand basic punctuation. If this were fixed, I have no doubt that this story would be one of my favorites. However, looking ahead to the last chapter, I saw it was exactly the same. I'm sorry. Good luck to you and your writing.
Joker Kane chapter 31 . 12/16/2016
this is grate story
Annabell242 chapter 27 . 6/18/2016
ok i could understand the bashing to a certain point but now this is just plain ludicrous i mean seriously a pineapple with explosive tags and then ends up getting killed, not to mention what dose naruto have against gay males i mean for fucks sake his mother is technically a lesbian aka homosexual female which makes him basically a hypocrite
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
when she and Naruto move to the whiopool the 2 had raing it as he Naruto bing the king of it and his mother with him his wife too as Queen of it , Naruto took all the frimly monly with him and others stff was his and all of the mife monly he ueds to buit it back up the whiopool and Naruto name his vaullan of his deda mom and the 2 pverd jeklord berfoer them too .
Idris2000 chapter 31 . 3/1/2016
Good story. Too bad it feels rushed! You should rewrite it.
Shadowolf chapter 30 . 1/18/2016
Naruto u poor and lucky (bleep)
Shadowolf chapter 22 . 1/18/2016
The executioner from resident evil (I know it's not it's real name but it is such a better name form them like "OH CRAP GUYS WE GOT A EXECUTIONER INCOMING" now have to say it's a better name for them
Shadowolf chapter 9 . 1/18/2016
Tea is a hella of a drug LMFAO! (Died from laughing)
johnsonanna48 chapter 29 . 6/8/2015
hahaha to all the chapters you made my day :)
MichealMyers chapter 31 . 3/26/2015
ANother chapter another fucking chapter
kevin steward chapter 31 . 7/13/2014
this story was awesome and I can't wait for more
9foxgrl chapter 31 . 6/7/2014
cool
Hikari Nova chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
Uzushio never had a civil war and was destoryed during the 2nd shinobi world war via combined forces of kumo kiri and i think iwa along with afew of the minor villages
Guest chapter 16 . 12/11/2013
this story is terrible, you can even seem to write a decent chapter, i've been trying for the last few hours to get through this and i'm finally giving up, it just sucks too hard to waste anymore time with it, just fucking squash this pathetic waste of internet space
Gabrielus Prime chapter 13 . 8/30/2013
"Good morning coffee zombie." Ya know, I can actually see Naruto saying that...
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