Very sensible course of action :)

Love it. Have you given any thought to a sequel/second chapter? It would be great to have an accompanying piece showing the accident and rescue from the perspective of everyone else.

like it? I love it :) good thing you still found it on your PC and posted it!

Great job done with this story and I've enjoyed all your others too. Thanks so much for sharing.

This is a great story. The ending is really sweet, I love it.

This is so well written and I absolutely loved it. Great work!

I do like it, I do! Nice job on the tricky POV-vague and disjointed enough to convey Rodney's condition, but never too confusing for the reader (which I much appreciate! -_). There's a dreamy quality, too, that distances us from the pain and brings the themes of teamwork and trust to the fore. Plus, I love Rodney's reaction in the Jumper, and the easy way in which his friends calm him. Very nice, indeed-thanks for sharing!

I just read this for the second time. I love it. Just wish it went on.

Melissa

I like how the small series of events has a different person each time as Rodney drifts in and out. The lack of explanation of how works as it's unnecessary. I really like that it started with him dreaming about his helping in a rescue a few days before then switches to part way through his own. The final couple of lines are what makes it a brilliant story.

great one shot thank you for sharing

E.

This is a sweet story, I like how easily you show the trust Rodney has in his team. A huge difference from when they first got to Atlantis.

"He's not used to being on his back in the jumper… it just isn't right. The ancient ships are his responsibility – after all, they're his place of work. It's like Carson taking a nap on the floor of the operating room."

I love the analogy comparing this situation to Carson sleeping in the operating room on the floor, what a perfect comparison! I think it really gets to the heart of the issue, Rodney is used to being in control, being the one responsible for saving everyone else with his brains, and for the roles to be reversed is a bit disconcerting. Great fic, thanks for sharing!

That was a very good story.

Loved it! Simply loved it.

In character, compelling, no grammar or punct. mistakes that I could see. Fun, and with a good ending.

Loved it.

I like the way so many people are involved, team and otherwise. The disjointed quality works well.