Aw! So sweet! Great job!

any chance of a sequel? :)

That was so sweet :,) if only that was an actually episode

An interesting alternate take and pairing between Kisara and Seto Kaiba, rather than Priest Set. This pairing doesn't really catch my attention that much in the Yugioh fandom, but it has now. Good job.

Aw! XD I'm sold!
Yes, that's right, you've just sold me on this pairing, great job! XD

Okay, very interesting AU. Undying loyalty indeed...

awwww! This was cute! I love how Kisara was the one who gave Kaiba his third blue eyes :)

Great story, I really liked it!

Great story!

very good story

Awwwwwww~ It's so cute! I really enjoyed reading this. I love Blueshipping, and this was very well written. I liked the AU world you created, it was rather easy to follow. If you write more stories to this world, I will certainly read them. In fact, I'll look right now if you have more. Because it was just that awesome. And it wasn't very predictable, either, big plus. Never thought stealing food would end up with her giving him a Blue Eyes card in return. It was pure fluff, and I loved every bit of it. Great story. Amazing, really.

Lolchen

Much love to Seto/Kisara, especially in a modern day scenario that doesn't warp her character. It's nice to see some steel in her personality; I especially cheered when she stood up against the stealing employee. YOU GO GIRL. w

I was a little taken aback by Seto though - I felt he was a little kinder than I expected, but the logic to his caring (loyalty of employers) are sound in Seto-reasoning.

Good job. :D

Oh my goodness! What a fantastic story! Really! What a fantastic story! This is one of the best Kaiba x Kisara stories I've ever read! Just... superb! You got their emotions wonderfully. Kisara's quiet yet fierce nature, Kaiba's command mixed with intrigue, even Mokuba's cheek! 3

Oh, you MUST write more~ I wanna know more! I want to know what Mokuba thinks of Kisara! And who is Seth? This third brother! Will Kaiba win the match against Atem! Will there be any rivals on love! And how will dinner go? Ahem. You completely got me into this new world you crafted~

Goodness! Please write more of this epicness!

Great Story!

This was absolutely fantastic! I know that you wrote this for a challenge, but I almost wish that you had made this into a story instead of just a one-shot! There seems like there is so much more that you could have done with this, like bringing Seth in instead of just mentioning him or writing chapters about the tournament. Anyway, I love this the way it is, and since this is the only one of your stories that I have read so far I don't know if you ever wrote any more set in this version of the Yu-Gi-Oh world, but if you did I would love to read them! Spectacular job and I hope to read more of your stories when I get the chance!