Reviews for A challenge
Ophelia Havisham chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Sad. Very sad.

Very well written though, I liked it.
TheMidnightSprite chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
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This was pretty good, but I've seen the same story on facebook likes, except it was just a generic boy and girl xD.

The idea seems much more possible in Wonderland, though, because I don't really see a real-life girlfriend not knowing her boyfriend has cancer (with all the trips to the hospital) and the undertakers leaving the coffin in the guy's house O_o;;

It's much more believable in Wonderland :'3.
Niphuria chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Beautifully written. I love this. However, denying her the chance to say good-bye was horrible of him. She would have had to get used to living without him anyway. But still, like this!
deathroman13 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I am stunned...

I should not listen to a sad song while reading this...

It made me have tears in my eyes. :)
kookookarli chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
that's really sweet, i just dont like it when the hatter dies :(
Scooter12345 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
That was really pretty! I loved it. The idea behind him saying don't talk to me for a day . . . and then the why factor was just SO pretty!
Joy.in.the.Storm chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
The Hatter's challenge and letter were a strange, quirky, sad, sweet thing, and I think this story could make it as something other than a fanfic, probably. The only part that really, really didn't ring true was, "He's dead!" "No, he'll always be in your heart." "Oh, right-now I'll be happy!" When you lose someone, it takes time to grieve. Just hearing some gushy stuff about them always being with you doesn't make everything better. Alice will get over it...but it might take a couple years.

Thanks for writing this. Good job,

Joy