Reviews for Omega Kid
Guest chapter 58 . 1/26
DUUUUUDDDEE WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?!
Gravemind chapter 58 . 8/15/2014
When will we see Slasher again?
T-1000000 chapter 58 . 7/24/2014
I don't know if this is the best place to ask, but at any time, can you read and review my story Slender Man? I would appreciate feedback.
SwathedManx7777 chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
Wow, a 69/100 in Nevada USA would be a D. Just wanted to say that. I guess you guys have it easy.
BrenRome chapter 58 . 7/3/2014
Sorry I'm getting back to you late, but I've had a long day and I'll be updating my fic later on tomorrow. First, let me say congratulations on a well-written chapter! A lot of great twists, a lot of great suspense, and a great resolution. And the next arc features The Motherf*****?! Can't wait to see how you handle him. Take care until then, buddy!
BrenRome chapter 57 . 4/9/2014
Totally. Worth. The wait.

THIS IS WITHOUT A DOUBT ONE OF THE BEST CHAPTERS YOU'VE PUT OUT SO FAR!

Loved the whole trust thing with Marcus. Personally, I'm not to sure myself, but let's see where this takes us.

Also, LOVED Jenna discovering Thomas's secret! Did you read the Ultimate Comics Spider-Man where the new Ultimate Spidey revealed himself? It sounds similar to that!

All I can say is Welcome back Omega Kid and bring it on, Chapter 58!

Hope you update soon!

BrenRome

PS:

Did u get that email I sent u? Please PM me back if you did.
Search143 chapter 20 . 2/12/2014
I am just reading over this story again, and with a closer look I can still say it's one of my favorites. I will point out a couple of spelling and/or grammar mistakes but that can be easily remedied. Still an awesome story.
Search143 chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
I've read this story more than a few times and I can honestly say it's one of the best Fanfics that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The story is clear, the characters are well described, presented and grown out as it continues. The base of the story; London, is well written like I can almost see it and with the transition from a ordinary teen wishing he could more, throughout this story, does in fact become MORE that what he hoped also adds a sense of growth and maturity as you read on. I can safely, honestly and with pride say... this is the best Kick-Ass' Fanfiction (in my personal opinion) EVAH!

Just one small question, anymore chapters after 56 or is that gonna be in another story?
Wombat chapter 55 . 10/6/2013
Really great work, I had an absolute blast reading your fic!
Bexteron chapter 18 . 8/17/2013
I love the start of the Ripper Arc. It was great to see that Thomas and his friends are all in a crime fighting “gang”. There are more numbers now which should help the fighting go smoother. Maybe? Also I wondered how things might turn out after the end of the last volume. It was so dark and this chapter didn’t skimp on the dark either. Starting off with a nightmare grabbed my attention because it was unexpected. Although giving what he had been through in the past weeks it wasn’t that much of a stretch. It was traumatic and people deal with it differently. It was hilarious when they were fighting the druggies. Some things never change and the dynamic between the boys was funny to watch…er, read. Their teasing Thomas over Rachael made me smile too. I wonder too how things are going to be between the two and how it will progress. I like that things between them seem to be on the right track toward a proper relationship. Just too bad that their moment was ruined at the end. And speaking of relationships. You tripped me up with Stella’s new one. Made me grin so much, I couldn’t stop laughing and Thomas’s reaction to it made me laugh more lol I think they’ll make a great couple :) The end was quite chilling and sets the event to the new volume up nicely :D
postmanobama chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
I've just started reading this, but it's already brilliant. This is awesome, and wish there was more stuff like it on .
Bexteron chapter 17 . 5/12/2013
This chapter was great and made the end of volume 2 awesome. There was so much action, fighting, violence, friendship and thinking in this chapter that made it one of your best so far. The fighting itself was really great. I could see every move, feel every punch and felt the pain of each one's impact. It was very tense throughout and felt very real. It didn't feel to overly actiony if that makes sense? It had a sense of realism to it with made it more believable. I like the dirty fighting and the darkness to it, too. the start of the chapter was a great end. Hearing about No-One's back story, you can't help but feel a little sorry for him, but he is really smart and cunning; creating a gang to destroy all the other gangs around, then disguising yourself as a hero to destroy that one after it's all done was very smart. It exacts revenge and cleans itself up really nicely, but it is very viscious and underhanded. I think No-One is a lot smarter than I originally gave him credit for, and after getting away as he did I think Omega Kid has to keep watch over his back. I love that Alex and Stephen finally got their chance to shine as Thomas's sidekicks. Now, not only does he have extra help, but they will also stop nagging him for them to join XD Awesome chapter, Tommy. I loved it :D
Bexteron chapter 16 . 5/4/2013
I knew it! Ahh, I bloody knew it! Haha lol. Sorry, I'll get to what I mean in a minute...

This chapter was awesome, and talk about action packed! There was so much violence and fighting mixed in there with comedy that it was like a match made in heaven lol First off, I wondered how Thomas and Stella were going to get away from Marcus and was pleasantly surprised by their escape. Quick thinking from Omega Kid and Stella :) The boys were absolutely hilarious in this chapter, and with the different POVs, I kinda got a better look into what they were like on their own. It's funny when I realized that they are completely the same as when they are with Thomas XD Now I feel sorry for Thomas - more than before, I mean ;) lol. Their arguing, wrestling and then getting caught watching porn was funny, blaming it on each other. Then there was the the whole Vanessa thing. Yikes, talk about disturbing. I was wondering what their first job was going to be when it came to crime fighting, and starting off with something like that was just...scary...but they prevailed :) That was cool. Their fighting and humour really played well with their teamwork, which helped later on when they teamed up with Thomas. I was just glad they were safe.
Their sneak attack on the Toxin's base was awesome. I found it strange that No-One knew where they were and just suddenly popped up out of nowhere. I'm glad I wasn't the only one that noticed, as Stella had, too. I always had a strange feeling about him. I don't know what it was, but something about him just said don't trust him, and I didn't...and rightfully so. After all they went through, it looks like their efforts might have been in vain! D: Oh man...Thomas and his friends are in trouble! DX
Nadia Blackrose chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
I love Thomas' devotion, it proves he his focus onto becoming a hero, and also knows he has a long way ahead. He persists, though, and doesn't give up, nor does he try to get involved in fights just to show off his improvement. I like that part, it shows Thomas really wants to fight for the good sake of people, and not just for power.
The part with Rachael was so sweet! I'd hardly expect her to be weak in this subject, since it's rather easy and all it takes is memorizing. Yet it was the perfect chance for Thomas to begin interacting with her, and surely that will bring them closer. It also shows that Rachael is an approachable person regardless of her being sexy and a good student and such. She seems really sweet and normal to me, not like any girl who has set her nose too high ( I mean to be posh etc) when she's got quite the reputation. And I liked the fact she's going to meet with Thomas out of school, hope their relationship begins to evolve, and really it grows stronger on a regular basis. Lovely part.
Now...the part with Jason really drove me mad. Omega should punish them as it fits them for their despicable actions. Lives are not toys to be taken and destroyed that easily and recklessly, they've got to learn that the hard time, cause they deserve it. I am looking forward to see how well Omega will deal with this, cause William didn't deserve to leave that way.
I still love the way you switch from one mood to another, at first the cool and pleasant part of this chapter which gives it's turn to the less pleasant one- about those scums. The change goes smoothly and is not a sudden one, it also keeps the reader more interested to know what's gonna happen next. And I really wanna see what's about to come.
Keep up the good work! :)
Nadia Blackrose chapter 4 . 1/14/2013
I liked the whole parkour thing...Man, I always wonder how much training is needed to accomplish such a difficult thing, and how many times the parkour-ists must have had terrible accidents all the way through. It seems Thomas got to learn some of it, though being afraid of heights is really hard to cope with, and overcome it. I guess he will do it, though, as long as he forgets to look down, or when he builds enough self-confidence. So human of him to have fears like everyone, and once more I love the emphasis you put on that side of him.
His efforts to rope-climbing are also so admirable, and his determination shines bright. He doesn't give up, regardless of the obstacles he finds in his way, and actually those obstacles are set by his own self. I'm sure he will be able to pass them, and will no longer contain himself.
It's all about practice, in the end. The fighting scene was spectacular, though I was a bit confused with the changes between the tenses ( I mean, during the fighting scene you used the present tense- while the story is narrated on past tense), so I would like to ask you if changing tenses is acceptable while narrating a story in english. I ask that because the teachers didn't allow us to do such a thing while writing a story in english, maybe for fear we ruined everything.
I am glad that the outcome of this fight was positive for Omega Kid. The more he fights, the quicker his reflexes will become, and soon he will be unbeatable. On top of that, martial arts is not about strength but technique and heart. I bet Thomas knows that.
I just get the feeling Thomas' friends didn't pay the proper attention to Omega's appearance...Ungrateful punks, they should pay for that! :p
Watch out, badasses, Omega will kick your ass! :D
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