|Reviews for Aisle 3|
| Sinful-Metaphor chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Well, guess I'm finished reading every Clack stories you wrote (in less than 24 hours no less: a day off well spent) which means I'm officially out of things to read. Haha.
Again, what a great little ficlet we have here. I love the tone you set for this one, quite romantic-comedy-like, and wouldn't have it any other way. Sephiroth and Genesis were awesome, especially the latter when he "downright refused" to bag whatever it was as any inclination to take the least part in it was absolutely "beneath him" (I even memorised the words, it was so funny) - and yes, Genesis, it's only fair: let us, commoners of the world, do all the petty chores for you!
Hope to read more from you soon :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
hilarious! loved it! cloud thinking seph is the best customer!ahahaahaaaa. and reno! you r brilliant
| Lady Lazy chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Loved it! Hahaha, sexually charged flirt... That's a new one! ;P In all seriousness, this was exceedingly cute.
P.S.: My condolences on all of the pervs you deal (dealt?) with at work. Must be very uncomfortable. : (
| lucydod chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Your customer classifications are dead on! I work at a gas station and we get all kinds if freaks in there. XD why can't a "zack" ever come in to visit? LOL! loved your story!
| Midori Ookami chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Loved your story! Think I might have some cavities now, but it was totally worth it hahaha!
| Colette Hyuga chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Aww Zach is so sweet. Cute. As cloud said, he isnt the shy type but he couldnt get the courage to approach cloud first. I can almost see sephiroth getting tired of zach complaining and dragging zach to the moogle mart. Lol.
Your authors note about people sayjng those things to cashiers freaked me out. I tjought you exagerated some things i the story but to realize people really do call cashiers baby and tootles and etc. Ugh. Shivers. Guess i learned something new today!
| MiyuCat chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
I loved this very much. ) You gave me massive smiles, giggles and fuzzy feelings. Thank you!
| Bubblegumhairedmonster chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
AHAHAHAHAHA! I wanna work at a grocery store now.
"A clock is only a clock if it's running just as a life is only a life if you're living."
| Sayonara7 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Oh wow I know the feeling Cloud! I work at a cafe and I serve/do register a lot because apparently I have good customer service skills (?) and serve everyone with a smile/am polite when inside I'm like Cloud, thinking FARRRRRRRRRRRRK OFF! Some customers are plain annoying, boring or CREEPS!
Luckily though we have annoying and some (ONE REALLY BAD ONE) creepy customers, they MAINLY keep it platonic so it's not that bad OTL
ANYWAY! So for me this fic is so relate-able (though I don't have a cute Zack Fair stalker ;A;) and SAH CUTE! I love how Zack was just revealed to be a little ball of nervousness and had to get forced to interact with Cloud XD
| Raincloud97 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
That was absolutely adorable! I loved it! : )
| Demona3870 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
This was brilliant. I love your style, and the story just grabbed me from the beginning!
| Von chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I only worked in a grocery store for two weeks. Although I wasn't harassed (that I remember) I experienced more plague-bearing members of humanity than I ever thought could have the nerve to leave their homes. SICK PEOPLE SHOULD ORDER IN! That's why we offered a delivery service! But no, I got gammy germ-ridden hands (they'd just coughed into, if they bothered to cover their mouths at all) handing me grimy germ-ridden money and awful body odour and pussy lesions of the face and uggh...
Revolting sods. Also, since we had to bag as we went, with no help, and lift the bags up and to the left, I swiftly developed a RTI. Fun.
Your story made me chuckle, although the bit where Zack refused to let Cloud go was a little on the creepy side. I was also waiting for Cloud or someone to point out that (except for the going home remark) what the creepy old customer had done was pretty much what *Zack* had done, making his rage a touch hypocritical. Plus Zack had tried on a whole lot of touching that the old man hadn't. I was a bit disappointed when it never came up because it kind of spun the story on the whole 'creepy behaviour is ok if it comes from a good looking guy your age' vibe. :S
All up, a fun scenario!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
OMG, I can't believe that people would hit on you guys in public like that! Sadly though, I'm not surprised. So then this is more or less a story about you, just without good looking guys and chocobo hair. Still, it's very well writen and I enjoyed it! Hugs
| LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I hope this happens to my sister cause she works as a cashier in a grocery store. Not the old pervert creeper guy part but having a cute stalker like Zack.
| Claim The Sky chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
oh Zack, you sexually charged flirt:). i laughed so hard at this fic, Zack is the cutest stalker ever!