|Reviews for Sub Rosa|
| BellaTallin chapter 4 . 5/29/2013
I'm really not sure what the say here. This is expertly written and definitely pulls the reader into the story, very imaginative and creative, but I still don't like it really. There isn't anything wrong with it, the characters had depth and the flow was brilliant. I guess I just don't like a dark Rose. Ah well, it was still a good story even if it's not for me.
| OnTheLastPage chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
"With some nameless bloke who always looked remarkably like me" I see what you did there xD
| vannadear chapter 4 . 7/18/2012
I'm totally shocked by how well written and thought out this was, you did a fabulous job! Not my typical type of story, but so well written I couldn't stop!
| thejacinthsong chapter 4 . 12/1/2011
This is fantastically written - I love it. I'm glad Rose acknowledged how manipulating the Doctor was - it had to happen.
Anyway, thank you for posting. I really enjoyed it.
| JPElles chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Great story. Nice dark, yet fluffy piece.
| I-de-BadBad-Wolf chapter 4 . 6/1/2010
Wow. Needed a good Rose/10 story to sink my teeth into. And boy oh boy did you deliver. Seriously hot stuff. And amazingly well written. Thanks for posting :)
| xasonous chapter 4 . 5/14/2010
it's differnt but i like it!keep goung:)can't wait..!
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 4 . 4/23/2010
You clever chook. You clever, clever chook.
So much threaded through this 4-shot. So many interplaying universes all woven into a tapestry that one can only really enjoy when one steps back and see's it in all its glory.
I loved the pieces of reality and showmanship with a pinch of this and a throwaway line of that.
And this Rose and this Doctor just said everything to one another I was feeling. And left unsaid the wealth that I couldn't even find words for. But it was there. And I love them, it and you for it all.
Hm. Such satisfaction is a deliciously languid and luxurious gift to bequeath to your readers.
Once more, and for the final time, T.H.A.N.K.Y.O.U.
You, my lady, just make reading an absolute pleasure.
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 3 . 4/23/2010
Oh Rose! I am so proud of you.
And Doctor! You complete and utter PILLOCK!
I don't care how clever you are and that you may not be human (or completely human if you buy that argument) and that you have lived for over 900 years and you can see time and space and beyond the event horizon . . . you still acted like a complete MAN! You IDIOT!
Rose, my darling, my sweet strong brave beautiful broken and whole Rose. . . . .
And we got sex! Crackers and cheese, wot sex we did get!
One final piece to this tale to go.
Sinecure, you are magnificent.
Thank you x
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
Oh God. Anticipation much?
Loved it. Loved the pain inside Rose's head. The pain in her soul. When she went to the roof, I almost cried out, expecting she was going to throw herself from the top. DOCTOR! Appear! Save her!
When Rose danced in the kitchen, all sexy and full of sensory overload in her man-shirt, I kept peeking over her shoulder. Doctor! Come! Look! She is beautiful and perfect and HERE!
And in the bathroom, with Rose exposed before the mirrors, I expected him to rise from the bathwater and fasten himself to her, suckling at her cunt and just being all, God, you know. . . . Doctor!
But for him (and surely it is he!) to be a new "client", to impart instructions for how she should be prepared for him, to be blindfolded and in a position of work and subservience and (sensory) deprivation and emotional overload . . .
Again with the sigh.
You and your story telling skills are divine.
And your way with pain and through pain and sharing pain is deft and wonderful and exciting and sublime and . . . real.
You make me ache. And that is one hell of a "wow" thing to experience through this medium.
xx Thank you for sharing this xx
| Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Oh! An new Sinecure! A new Sinecure! A NEW SINECURE STORY!
I swear, I am reduced to an embarressing squealing fangrrl when I see an update from you in my inbox.
But a whole new Sinecure Story really can do that to a girl, y'know?
This chapter just thrilled me. Wordy and dirty and achy and (forgive the Australian analogy here but it is necessary) like that thin scraping of vegemite on your morning toast. Rich, yeasty, strong, nourishing and anything but sweet.
This mother stung and was so broken but it hadn't decayed. The shards of what had "been" were thick and sharp edged and jagged but there was still pain when lookin upon the destruction. The damage was not complete enough to break everything down to individual molecules, not enough time had passed to see the compost of a decomposing past. The Doctor returned before all was ashes in the mouth, though God knows Rose probably believes it to be that way.
This chapter was perfect.
And I loved it. Just hardcore LOVED it.
And just because there really is a Goddess out there, I get the opportunity to keep reading!
Onward and upward. With gratitude ~Angelique~
| Luke's Momma chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
Spilt tea. Business card. Loved it. Completely, totally, utterl it!
| Luke's Momma chapter 3 . 4/20/2010
I don't know how to feel! I'm so mad at the Doctor for tricking Rose but I'm angry at her too - for becoming what she is, for giving up, for kicking him out.
But them I think about the hot 'n' heavy lovin' they've just indulged in and I wonder... do I really care LOL?
| Luke's Momma chapter 2 . 4/20/2010
Please, please, please let it be him...
| Luke's Momma chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Holy sh*t! Seriously. Holy sh*t! How utterly distraught must Rose have been to slip into the life of a Call Girl?
Jacqui's gone, the baby's gone. And the Doctor... OMFG... I can't even begin to imagine how he's feeling.
Awesome start. Moving right along...