Reviews for Harry Potter and the Magic Dragon
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29
Loved this. Your niece should definitely write a sequel.
PSay chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
This is a great little story. For you to write it so well at the age of 9 is really good. I hope you do keep writing. Very well done. Thanks for sharing your talent. pms
sakura952 chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Although the story did jump from place to place, which was a tad but confusing, it was overall good. The story it's self was good and the grammar and spelling was great! I'll keep an eye for the next one
BruceTN chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
She is a better writer than some of the presumed adults on this site.
Mrs. Nataly Snape chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Aww the story was really cute.. Please tell your neice to keep up the good work. It was really a lovely story.
elmoryakhan chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
This story was really cute tell your niece to keep up the good work, she has the potential to become a writer in future.
Goaliebaby chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
This is quite possibly the most adorable story ever. For a 9 year old your niece sure knows her stuff. Tell her to keep it up :)
LaDy ChEm chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
This story is very well written, way better than some of the other storys that i've seen on this website.
Pigeons are underestimated chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Sorry but that sucked...strangely good spelling,grammar and sentence structure for a nine year old though
Daniel james Black chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Hey. My names Adam I almost never review fictions.
I must say this was bad. I mean the story jumped so much.
It was jumbled and random at parts.
But i do have to say this. This story is one of the best I've read.
It coming from a 9yo girl. She has a lot of promise and with time I hope she gets better.
I wish you all the best and hope to read more of your stuff.

Adam
BeckyBoo12221 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Awwww, poor Harry, loosing Chris like that. Tell your niece I thought the story was very good, Bye,
-Becky
Harriverse chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
If your 9 year old niece wrote this story, then she has a good understanding of story sequence, plot and drama. She also put many elements in it that young people do, like the food aspects and such.

She has a good future ahead of her writing fiction.

Congratulations.
kildar2010 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
i have to say that your niece has a lot of talent and i hope she keeps up the writing, if she writes anymore stories can you post them for her?
I had a ball reading this as it reminded me of when i was a kid because i always wanted to be able to write like this but alas my writing skills are so bad that your niece can write better at 9 than i can at 20.
cheers for posting this and please keep her writing
jada951 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I enjoyed your story of Harry and Chris, the dragon.

Harry does discover the most amazing things, doesn't he?

One of my favorite parts was how he had to get rid of the eggshell, turkey and lots of root beer!

I thought maybe Chris might have ended up having to go Romania like Norbert, but I glad he got away and found his own life and a new friend!

Thanks for sharing your story.
Keep writing!
:)
Mrs.padfoot forever chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Hahaha how cute! I like this story and very well written for a nine year old. I would like to say awesome job!
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