Reviews for Family is Everything ALTERNATIVE VERSION
athenakitty chapter 5 . 4/21/2010
Ido hope that Severus gets a chance to make up with Harry. It would interesting to see how Teddy is like with Severus as the other parent. When will Severus get a chance for the makeup?
Madame de Coeur chapter 5 . 4/21/2010
Really, should always hear the conversation till the end. That will save us a whole lot of hurt lol. It know how that feels.

Loved it! I hope you update soon k!
LillianaSnape212 chapter 5 . 4/21/2010
I definitely love this version alot better than the first! I hope you update soon.
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 5 . 4/21/2010
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.
Madame de Coeur chapter 4 . 4/20/2010


Loved it though. Poor Sev.

Update soon!
Flying Chrissy chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
This is better than the first version! look forward to the next update.
peruser chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
It's obvious, from Harry's letter to Severus, that Harry doesn't feel that he deserves to have love. He's also being self sacrificing because he's 'stepping aside' to allow Severus and Lucius to be happy. Too bad that he doesn't know that Severus dropped Lucius for him.
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
I like this story. it is agood story. Please keep writing this story and update soon.
Badbonita chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
I see you're being generous and following your muse as well as giving your readers an earlier happier ever after - earlier than 11 years I hope *grin*

The letter from Harry was well done.
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