Reviews for Lethal to Virtue
Hanover78 chapter 23 . 2/18/2016
I hope that one day, you will come back to finish this story! I loved it!
jcnf009 chapter 23 . 2/13/2016
Would loveee to hear more from them!
Thanks!
jcnf009 chapter 6 . 2/13/2016
I'm so happy to have found this gem! I love the plot :)
Lee Ed chapter 23 . 11/30/2015
Nooooo you stopped updating :'(
I wonder how would Bella react... Will she flip out and be mad at him? Or will she be fine with it?
Sighs. Update please?
LolaTheSa chapter 18 . 3/30/2015
Honestly, bella is really just sensitive to anything edward does. I mean annoyingly sensitive. Anything he does in this story that hurts her even a little, he's an ass and she can get all pissy about it.
LolaTheSa chapter 12 . 3/30/2015
Long list was very short.
ren007 chapter 23 . 12/9/2014
i love this story do update soon
Guest chapter 9 . 12/3/2014
Edward: I thought it was bad enough that Edward abuses his power (both, in getting an advantage in what the ladies are thinking, but also getting away with crap at work because he's so valuable).

But, I'm not sure I like this Bella a whole lot either. She admitted liking getting cat-called in an earlier chapter, and now she's mad that she's not getting sexually harassed by her superior anymore?
Guest chapter 8 . 12/3/2014
Are we supposed to find Edward hot and irresistible?
Guest chapter 7 . 12/3/2014
In our ordinary, run-of-the-mill, everyday life, a "human moment" is a moment when a person is both physically AND emotionally present. It's a moment when, for better or worse, we realize that we are not automatons or robots, but human.

In the Twilight books, they use the term "human moment" to characterize something in opposition to the vampires in the story, who don't have to eat, drink, use the bathroom, etc., like humans need to do to survive.

Using the term "human moment" in an AH story always bugs the crap out of me.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/3/2014
So, I'm confused. I assumed that Jake was a jerk (at least in his feelings towards Bella), because he repeatedly refers to her as "his virgin" in his thoughts, like she's just some possession that he wants to claim. Now, it seems like he has real feelings for her? I don't think much of him (or of Edward, still).

LOVED Bella's reactions towards both the guys. Yes!

I also don't understand the airbags. How is Seth's modifications to them make them any safer if Edward cannot move after they're deployed? What if someone were after him, trying to kill him? And he cannot move? Makes zero sense.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2014
I'm guessing Jake's a douche, because who refers to their girlfriend as their "virgin girlfriend"? TWICE!

So far, I'm not finding this Edward attractive...I think he's smarmy. I like the storyline, so hopefully, he redeems himself.

And I'm glad this Bella stands up for herself and isn't some pushover.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
Washington Monument is not only made of more than granite, but it is not solid at all. Claiming the monument is "solid granite" would make it 100% granite...no structural reinforcements of any kind, no hollow spaces. Not having been there myself, a little bit of Googling told me there's at least a lobby at the bottom, an elevator, a staircase, and an observation area at the base of the pyramidion. That hardly makes the monument "solid."

If I bought a chocolate Easter bunny that claimed to be solid and wasn't, I'd be sorely disappointed! lol
Guest chapter 23 . 7/23/2014
please.. finish your story.
i really like your story
Abaire chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
Okay, how exactly did he guess it was James? That's a little too far if a leap to me without having some kind of hard evidence. Lets see what the next chapter brings. It's a fun tale so far. The trafficking story is tough to read.
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